hi.

hi.

A Poem by V M Smith
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you fragment my thoughts.
with one sighed word.

how do you do it?
there's a spell in it
somewhere,
but i'm not complaining.
i quite like focusing
only on you.

i get lost in your eyes,
and can't help the pull
at the corner of my mouth
when you murmur
in your soft, tired voice.
deep brown eyes,
framed in long lashes,
and so expressive.

i can't think correctly...
and this feeling is awesome;
your pull, it's magnetic.
teach me your ways?

"hi."
slowly it flows
from your lungs.
so naturally lazy.
hearing that tone
in your voice
could put me
back to sleep.

i pull you close.
kiss slow,
feel your breath pull mine.
"say that again"
i whisper.

smiles.
"hi."

good morning, hun.

© 2013 V M Smith


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V M Smith
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Oh so very sweet. That moment of waking up next to the single most important person in your life, where no matter how often it happens, just the sight of them always takes your breath away...that essence is here.

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Added on November 18, 2008
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Tags: want, need, poem, love, relationship, lgbt, queer, lesbian, gay, closet, coming out, sweet

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i'm not a writer; i am a liar. i sometimes write far too specifically; i sometimes write so vague even i lose track of what it is i'm on about. i tend to write when i can't think. this seems to be.. more..

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