racing

racing

A Poem by V M Smith

fun and games
through pain and flames
bite my lip and pull my hair
slow and tough
push me rough
break this streak of jaded days

push me against the wall again
and i'll pull you by your tie
down the hallway to the room
i'll make you match me moan and sigh

we move quickly to the bed
you trip over legos at the door
i pull my shirt off
you struggle with buttons
until i tear them all

we move toward the bed
and i pull you down on top of me
you kiss my neck and bite my ear
fingers stumble to pants and bras
nervous laughter hushed in the air

until suddenly it's over
and we dress
faster than we stripped
because once again
the school bus came early
we lost the race against it
and the front door slams
"mom!? hey, you guys home?"

© 2013 V M Smith


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V M Smith
I fully appreciate reviews, especially when they tear apart my work in an attempt to make it better. Rip, tea, break it down. Tell me how you do not like it, how to make it better. I want your opinion. Truly.

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I like it, its so sweet and lovely , thank you for posting : ) Yos


Posted 16 Years Ago


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Added on September 10, 2008
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