Explosion

Explosion

making choices

guided by childs thoughts

acting on impulse

why did you do it?

Bored dumb

a result of human-ness

and not the kind that denotes

compassion

animal behavior

non-thinking

to the highest degree

loss of control

explosion

of feelings and emotions

where did that get ya idiot?

how many more chances

do you

get

it

can you finally know

the treasure

right there

in your own home

wake up

stop the timer

cut the wire

before the next

explosion

Reviews

[BikerAngie]

Wonderful message can't wait to read more

[WoodwardThinks]

Ha! Nice and concise. I love it. I also feel like I've met this young man before... And while it seems fairly light, I like the message that they've got to realize how good things actually are. Right on.

[Mary]

very cool

[THE-NAMELESS]

this is a great write, cant wait to read more of your work! :)