Tell Me

Somethings just need to be said

Tell me how you need me,
Tell me how you care.
Tell me how I’m beautiful,
Tell me how my smile is kind and fair.

Tell me how you can’t breath without me,
Tell me how you can’t sleep when I’m gone.
Tell me how even in a room full of people,
Without me, you feel alone.

Tell how you will be there
When everyone else has failed,
Tell me how you will pick me up,
When my world feels derailed.

Tell me how you love my touch,
Tell me how you love my body.
Tell me how the look in my eyes makes you feel.
Tell me how I can kiss you better than anybody.

Tell me how we will grow together,
Tell me how it will always be you and me.
Tell me how it will be forever,
Tell me that we were meant to be.

Tell me how much you love me,
Like it will be our last day,
Tell me how much I mean to you,
Like it’s the last words you will ever get to say.

Just tell me...

Reviews

[Stephen]

The poem's still screaming on my mind n in the heart it's still beating like a pulse. Am trying to control but I think, you've allot of potential of creations, inspirations of love so, sorry, I can't control so, here we go .. here's the answers what me my heart felt when I n my heart both were reading your this marvelous gratifying poem...

I need you the way my heart needs some breath
You brighten my day I do care you I feel
Winds blow your hair... blow me to peace
that makes you beautiful.. a beautiful piece
Your a mixture, a mixture of honey bee
All flowery fragrance makes your smile kind n fair o' my "Queen Bee!"

My wind, my air, my cold, my heat ..
everything's you then without you how can I breathe?
My vision, my dream, my night, my all curious thing
all's to you ..then without you, how can I do Sleep?
You belong to me, my world belongs to you
The people're invisible to me ...
When if my eyes don't find you next to me!

Am not with you cus Am in you
So, how can you think even a once, "I can't reach you?"
My world's you, the breathe, the beat, the heat's you
If am a track, my "Super Express" is you
Then ..how can you think you can be derailed if your control's already in my hands, Phew!! ;)

When I get touched by you
it's seemed like i've put my bare hand inside an electric plug without clue
I don't care of your body, O' baby, you little pretty,
but don't know when you walk why my heart starts to beating?

No one can see in the eyes of the sun
But whenever I see ...the sun comes down on my palm
The kiss you.. O' baby, you kiss me
I better I feel, that's What I do feel,
It's impossible to get felt by anybody
Cus, what I do feel's all comes with you your heat
There's a mixture of some sweet n sour grapes
OMG! Whenever you do kiss ...my heart feel the fire of an "Earthquake!"

We grow, We walk, We hang n talk together
My heat's you, am your storm your thundering weather
Kissing you your neck making you feel relax in the every rainy weather
Our love's immortal, you baby, my pretty,
We're one soul two body .... n that's what I meant to be
to live with you ever ...ever... for life ... just "forever"

I love you the way my body needs some breeze
Your not special not even that much like a celebrity to me
What you all mean to me
Is.. I'd love you until an end of my last n last breathe!
That's the last words i'd always say, i'll ever get to say ...

"I LOVE YOU THE WAY, I LIVE.. MY HEART DOES BEAT,
I WANT TO DIE JUST HOLDING YOUR HANDS, MY QUEEN BEE,
PARDON ME, IF I'VE EVER BROUGHT SOME TEARS IN THOSE BEAUTIFUL EYES
WHICH'RE ALWAYS GET KISSED BY ME .. I LIVE!
I WANT TO SEE YOU IN MY EVERY VISION IN AN EVERY DREAM
CUS...I LOVE YOU THE WAY I LIVE
N YOUR SMILE ALWAYS BRIGHTEN MY DAY
I WANT YOU IN MY EVERY MORN IN BEAUTIFUL ARMS AROUND ME
MY DAYS N NIGHTS'VE ALREADY TAKEN BY YOU, YOU BY ME
O' BABY, MY PRETTY ...
MY QUEENY..MY BEE,
I'D TO DIE IN YOUR ARMS CUS ..
I WANT TO LOVE YOU UNTIL THE END OF MY LAST BREATHE!
THAT'S ALL WHAT I'LL EVER WHISPER UNTIL AN AND OF MY LIFE!

I've given you all of me, you've given me all of you to me
Now what brings you to ask me ...
What, how, when n why I want ...
My life's already Unleashed to you n yours to me
so, baby, there's no need to ask anything
cus ...my life's already unleashed to you n yours to me!"

[sayed Mudasir Ali]

What a lovely love poem ? I was completely blown away by the imagery and words ..............my goodness I think I need you just the way you are ...just kidding ...............Great write sweet girl.

[bobmar81]

Thank you very much!