Missing a Friend

Missing a Friend

A Poem by Winters_Lost_Walk
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It's like written thoughts, about a friend I really miss.

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It's been a while
Since we last talked
You helped distract me
Lose my thoughts

Where are you now?
What happened to us?
I really miss you
I need you by my side

You were always helpful
You heard my thoughts
You were like a best friend
The ones that always get lost

Well guess what,
So did you
Why did you have to leave me too?
Am I impossible
For one to handle the truth?

© 2011 Winters_Lost_Walk


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J.M
We all lose friends at some point in our lives, and this is something i can definitely empathise with. To me friendship is like a star. When there it shines, sometimes it vanishes or seems to and often it can take a long time but there's always a chance that it's be re-born out of the debris left behind.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Made my mind drift back to childhood friends... those so distant now. You create a longing sensation to recapture that friendship that has become hidden by time...

Posted 13 Years Ago


There's a lot of powerful feelings in this. You're feeling sad because your friend left you when you clearly trusted them, and confused, because you're wondering how you got to this point. Probably a little bit of regret too for letting whoever it was that was so important to you slip away. I can definitely relate. Good job and keep writing!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on January 21, 2011
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Winters_Lost_Walk

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It's about time I do actually write something about me =] I'm a 19 year old girl, quite an emotional person. It's a little hard describing myself, but from what others say, I'm a lively girl, and ope.. more..

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