a e i o u and sometimes y

advertently i listen,
even when you don't do the same,
i grip at your bones,
only then will you feel me & care,
utter contempt unless i change for you,
sometimes i ask myself,
why?

Author's Note

i had this idea late at night where i should start each new line with a new vowel & end with "why?" obviously the second last one conflicts with this idea, but i feel like i did just fine.

Reviews

[August]

Wait this is such a great idea, you're a genius!

[Relic]

You could always extend it by going backwards. Cool idea, I never tried it.

[Beren]

HELLOO BABYY! GOSH, WHY DO YOU HAVE TO BE SO PERFECT AT EVERYTHING!😭❤️