between good and evil

if you went to hell,

you’d look like an angel.

heaven knows you’re a false prophet,

so you're denied entry.

earth,

the inevitable place for you to end up.

you're just human,

that is all.

Reviews

[Beren]

what on earth? THIS IS HOLY good!
You urgently need to give me lessons on writing poetry.
I'm sure you're sleepy when you read my poems. There's no way you can write so beautifully and not know that you're better than others. obsessed w your poems currently

[1809 Black Plague Decem..]

Dear Ashley,
Oh wow! Batter up,
I got denied, first step to heaven,
great read!
----Maynard.

[Mira]

It's the way I see things. Thank you for your poem.

[ashley]

your understandings make me glad, thank you for your comment :3

[Mira]

You are most welcome.