My Soul Lay Sleeping

There is fa more to life than a physical body

My soul lay sleeping

On a forgotten island

In a shell swept to the shore

Sweet songs lay silently secret

Within my bowels

 

Golden light that creeps

Within like fingers coaxes me

To come out and play

 

I hear the sirens serenade

On the whips of wind

In the shadow of the moon

From places no one sees

Deep within and far away

 

Golden light that creeps

Within like fingers coaxes me

To come out and play

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Etoiles]

Loving that second stanza,
it's beautiful.

:)

[d]

seems distant and far away and long ago. i like it.

[Teri B]

The inner me, the soul of me, hidden from the world, sees the light, feels the wind's whisper, waits for the safe time to reveal itself.

[paparapapa]

A very creative take on how our soul behaves and what it's like inside us. Interesting subject matter and an okay flow. Great job. :)

[Cassie Fraga]

very nice free verse luv!! and very creative word play!!
**keep that ink flowin**