A Thousand Faces

In my minds eye I see dimly the things I once believed

My memories are like shattered bits of glass

Recurring in pieces, rifts of land locked time

As my days slide in and out against the deep

To edges of my mind’s eye in silent particles

Drifting back to sea again taking grains of me

A thousand faces in my memories fly away

I can hear their voices like silent murmurs

A chiding vaporous echo screams if you will

Neither friend nor foe only lonely chattering

My optic nerve is a spiraling wormhole of sort

Offering glimpses of the past I've forgotten

Reviews

[OtherWorldWoman]

I really like this. It flows really well and the way that it is written makes me think of it read out in a faint echo. The italics give it a really neat effect. It is a very cool way to portray memories as well and I can relate. I had so many different feelings as I skimmed over the delicately crafted words numerous times. Well done.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

A thousand faces in my memories fly away.........this made me think of all the times I have wondered what it would be like if we could just for one moment remember everything in our lives. Excellent!

[deeps]

I can feel this write, so emotional. I enjoyed this read.

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A thousand faces in my memories fly away
I can hear their voices like silent murmurs
A chiding vaporous echo screams if you will

These lines here are really captivating and tugs at me. I really enjoyed this powerful deep write....xo