Loves Concealed

Loves Concealed

A Poem by bobby
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A lovers heart taken to temptation

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What does true love conceal with temptation’s arm?

Rendering shame upon the heart and soul confused

Oh such is a benevolent lover given to him with lust

Uncovering unreported adoration at a whims notice

Such aims are not his conversation but her conceit

Prides pitfall to him who falls hapless into her arms

Once before not yet his own she did show him in vain

Removing bridal veil and corset, revealing her figure

With skillful heart, beaming eyes in full glare she took him

What was he but to have fallen carelessly and hopelessly

Uncovering love’s temptation which does lie beneath skin

© 2011 bobby


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Lovely write,Loved the line 'Uncovering unreported adoration at a whims notice' Can't wait to read your other writing :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Again a succinct and telling write - you capture the essence of lust well here!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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bobby
bobby

san diego, CA



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