Elemental

Using the 4 elements to describe a bad breakup...

High with emotions,

Gasping for air,

Water too deep,

I am trending waves,

Everything is in shambles,

You are draining my life away,

Too heavy a burden to carry,

I am drowning.

Running from you,

I fear nothing good will come

Your nature and mine collide,

but it was never meant to be,

Sadness grips me like vines,

I want to climb away,

As far from you as I can get.

I hate you,

I loathe you,

You disgust me,

You abused me,

Burn everything I have

That even reminds me of you,

Try to contact me again?

I will scream my wraith

That you cannot even face.

Good to finally be free,

To fly away into the sky,

To be the real me that I can be,

Everything has been lifted

Off my shoulders,

For you cannot touch me,

You cannot control me,

Not any longer,

No one shall abuse me anymore.

Author's Note

Writing my emotions down again. This time about my last ex.

Reviews

[Paul Bell]

Well that's a weight of your shoulders. Time to move on, see what and who's round the corner. Bet you're glad you moved on.

[Brittany Defranco]

I am thank you

[Seeker]

I'll bet writing the poem helped put yourself together and fly away. Good for you!

[Brittany Defranco]

Thank you :)

[Relic]

These are pretty strong feelings. The leftover residue can stain a relationship pretty bad when hate is involved.

[Brittany Defranco]

Yeah I agree

[Jibey]

Good idea to provide some structure. It reads like an escape from hell. Makes its point directly and clearly.

[Brittany Defranco]

It really was. Thank you