Hidden Beneath The Mask

A woman takes sharing everything she loves and hates with one person too far

No matter how much you hurt me

No matter how many tears I’ve bled

No one can hear your screams now

No one can save you this time.

Everyone will see you for the monster you are

I don’t care if you cry

I don’t care if you beg

I will never forgive you until you bleed yourself dry.

I am no longer your plaything

I am no longer your saint

For I am your nightmare that haunts you each night

You slowly broke my heart….

Now I will slowly break your soul.

A knife to slice your skin

A needle to keep you aware

Must keep you alive enough to feel my pain inside

You cry, you beg, you scream for the end!

I have found a new game for us to play

This pleasure is just the beginning...

I ride you all night long, my sounds, just for you

Making love to show that I do care.

Need you inside me,

Need you to feel me,

Make me cum you naughty slave,

Don’t want you to end up like the others….

I wake from my pleasant dreams,

Sigh…

It’s only morning…?

Time to place a new mask to wear for now,

Must not let anyone see what I hold inside,

That is only meant for the one I love.

Be sure to stop by the basement before I leave for the day

Say goodbye to my guest with a smile upon my face,

Would not want him to think I have forgotten

After all, I share my love and pain with no one else….

Author's Note

This is my first poem about something or someone that's psychotic, crazy and creepy. I thought it would be fun to write from a killer's point of view rather than the victim.
Thoughts?
And should I write more like this?
And I don't think this is rated Mature, but if you think I should rate it that way please tell me and I'll change it, Thanks :D

Reviews

[KCthelastboyscout]

Very well done.wouldnt change a thing.only thing I would do would be to write this from the victims point of view.imagine yourself trapped somewhere unable to escape and experiencing controlled ecstasy at the expense of your free will

[Brittany Defranco]

Thank you, I feel like victims get written too much though so I wrote from the killer's pov

[keith]

new territory new writing
still done well
versatile writing talent

[Brittany Defranco]

Thank you, I loved placing myself in the serial kidnapper's point of view in this one