Moon

Moon

A Poem by Brittney Maxwell
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haiku about the moon

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What a crisp white smile 
that shines from skies down to Earth
always mystery

© 2013 Brittney Maxwell


Author's Note

Brittney Maxwell
this is my first time writing a haiku. i thought that it was very challenging! i was reading haikus that people wrote and they were beautiful. constructive criticism only.

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Bravo! It is a difficult form but you painted alovely image. Read the last line aloud and count the syllables.

How would you feel about "always mystery"?

The form is a challenge, particularly for me as brevity is not my forte but I should give you a warning. It is addictive. I really look forward to reading more from you.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Bravo! It is a difficult form but you painted alovely image. Read the last line aloud and count the syllables.

How would you feel about "always mystery"?

The form is a challenge, particularly for me as brevity is not my forte but I should give you a warning. It is addictive. I really look forward to reading more from you.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 10, 2013
Last Updated on June 12, 2013
Tags: haiku, beginner, moon, nature

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Brittney Maxwell
Brittney Maxwell

NY



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My name is Brittney and I am just like most young adults. I am an artistic individual who wants to test her limits and find another outlet to be creative in. I love family and have many pets (3 leopar.. more..

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