You Don't Care

This is a poem about my dad enough said read the poem

You could break my heart

You wouldn’t even know

I don’t think you care

How much that you are

It’s too much for me to bare

You are just plain cold

To this unknown world

 

You walk right past me

As if you don’t notice me

What do I have to do?

To prove to you

That I will always love you

When you won’t let me get too close

Into the world that you live in so cold

 

You think of my heart

As light as a feather

But I still try to keep us together

Even though we are worlds apart

There’s no light at the end

This hole is so dark

Where should I begin?

 

I am falling, crawling

I am dying, crying

In those eyes you don’t care

I am drowning and so scared

And I don’t think you’re ever going to care

Reviews

[The dark story]

the last stanza is imbued with depressions....i have actually got no words to explain my feelings on it.my voice broke into a sob when i was reading it out...i am going to pray for your dad's and yours reunion

[Brandon Mathis]

he is so so close to me but so far away from the emotions that he puts in my heart

[Serenity Faith]

Such feeling. Hopefully your dad will come around, one day. Life is too short to be so cold or bare grudges. Amazing poem all the same.

[Brandon Mathis]

He says that he will come and see me then never does and he has a beautiful grandson that he never sees my profile pic is of my son and wife how can you stay awhile from such and angel like that