Won't Run Away

You know who you are

You can feel it run through your heart

I can’t tell you that you’re safe from it all

But I know I won’t let you fall

There’s nothing to gain

From all of your complaints

But I’ll do my best saving us all

 

I’ve got my bags packed

I can feel the air starting to attack

It’s beginning no way to stop this

Everything turning to blood

Everyone hurting swallowing our blood

 

There was a beauty that I once knew

It was taken from me

What could I really do?

Why am I saved?

Is the blamed left on me?

I still can’t contemplate what I just went through

 

But I’ll keep fighting till it’s over

I’ll be here as long as it takes

I won’t run away

I don’t want to drown under a wave

But I’m still fighting cause it’s not over

 

When everything around me

Is falling all around me

Everything is starting to look so incomplete

Why does this world want me so lonely?

But I won’t run away

I won’t give in one damn day

Reviews

[The dark story]

"But I’ll keep fighting till it’s over
I’ll be here as long as it takes
I won’t run away
I don’t want to drown under a wave
But I’m still fighting cause it’s not over".....this stanza is just awesome.....this is such a powerful poem with such a powerful words........but yes i would request you to please put some punctuation marks(comma)...wherever they are require..they are not invented for no reason...

"But I’ll do my best, saving us all"

But I know, I won’t let you fall...i don't think that i need to point out rest of the line.......i'm saying so because they play a very vital role in writing....and reading..and i know you know this as well

[Brandon Mathis]

no i don't i sucked at English i just like writing poems ,lol