Safe

I finally read your note

I’m stuck in this cage

I have lost all of my hope

In your arms It feels like home

In this cage I break away

So I can be with you

I don’t want to fight on my own

 

Every day is a mystery

So despite of my history

Take it all away

This has turned into misery

Don’t leave me in this broken place

Show me that I can believe

Tell me that I’ll be safe

 

Another lonely day lost in the sky

Hoping to be a magic flying star

I would wishupon myself as my heart

I wish that I could give it to you in real life

I wish things could come to us so easily

But please you have to trust in me

 

I won’t let you down

When you finally trust me

You have made me feel so complete

I will never let you down

Since you finally believe in me

You make my world so complete

So i now i know that I'm safe

Reviews

[Serenity Faith]

beautiful poem as always Brandon. Your feelings leak through brilliantly!
I did see a few grammatical errors, nothing big of course ^_^

"So I now i know that I'm safe"~ So now i know i'm safe
"I would wishupon myself as my heart"~ I would wish upon myself as my heart
"So despite of my history."~ So despite all of my history~So despite my history~So in spite of my history.

[Brandon Mathis]

Thank you very pointing all of the graphical errors

[ewest1220]

Love it man very beautifully done and I love the honesty in this piece. Great job!

[Brandon Mathis]

Thank you very much for your review

[The dark story]

this is a very beautiful poem...the last stanza... is really very touching.......nice work...