Torn

Today we will change

break down to the floor

as our life is torn away

 

Falling to pieces

torn at the seams

it takes my breath away

can you hear my screams

you’ve taken my beliefs

there’s no way we can change

 

Life is undone

My world will be numb

while my cold heart

tears away at my skin

my own last sin

as I fall apart

 

Can you hear my shout

as my insides are torn out

you take all my dreams and beliefs

so this is the death of me

Reviews

[ewest1220]

I agre with closed on this one I love your writing style man keep it up!

[closed..acct]

Such a deep powerful, emotional read,
nicely presented.