Help You Breath

Breath in, breath out

then you will know what im talking about

its just a little hazy, im your escape

ill take you out of this place, far away

 

Lets float for a little while

ill make you feel so alive

till the end of time

you are mine, my eyes in you I die

 

Hold your breath

don’t let it out

our love you know you cant doubt

so ill save your life

till the end of time

we live so alive

 

You were drowning

I pulled you out

you believed in me

you are my everything

that you don’t change

so I help you breath

Reviews

[ewest1220]

Love where you're going with this one man I do want to point out one point I stumbled on was the last stanza. You are my everything, that you don't change. The that trips me a bit. But man that idea is great! And once again I love your style in writing! Good work.

[Brandon Mathis]

i think i meant to write you are the every thing in me that you don't change

[ewest1220]

yes I do lol sorry about that

[Brandon Mathis]

don't worry bout' it