Bleeding Heart

Turn your blind eye

And act like you don’t see me

I just want you to acknowledge that I’m alive

In the end the truth will be left behind

As my heart bleeds

 

You leave me all alone to fight my own war

The more I stumble, the more I feel torn

Sometimes I wish that I weren’t born

I’m broken again with my life so scorn

I can’t even imagine what my life was before

 

I’m sitting here fighting my sleep

Because I know I will have a bad dream

I don’t want to wake up screaming

With my heart in my hand bleeding

 

There are so many emotions

That I can’t escape

You are putting me through so much pain

It feels like my life you have stolen

And my faith you take

 

In these moments

I’m alive but I’m still broken

So many emotions,

That have been stolen

With my bleeding heart in my hand

You make me feel like less of a man

So take my hope and steal my soul

Reviews

[TheJordBaker]

In these moments
I’m alive but I’m still broken
- brilliant

powerful and deep all the way through, one of my favourites of yours. keep it up!!

[Lost in Wonderland]

So deep and sad and beautiful. The emotions were heartbreaking and a bit relatable. Very well done!
God bless
~Mickey

[Brandon Mathis]

thank you sorry you can relate

[Lost in Wonderland]

No problem and sorry someone made you feel like this

[Brandon Mathis]

it's all good life goes on

[Lost in Wonderland]

yep it sure does

[Crimson Bayonet]

Just amazing. So much emotion and was very deep. I loved it.

[Brandon Mathis]

thank you very much

[afra]

very dark and deep ...well done

[Brandon Mathis]

thank you

[Pax]

emotionally sad and heartfelt tale of your hardship. well written, great job

[Brandon Mathis]

thank you its how my dad is making me feel

[Pax]

i know just be strong for your own good and your own family. someday he will realize his mistakes in life.

[Brandon Mathis]

i hope so

[quixotic_rose]

so very emotional, a bleeding heart indeed. Emotions of the heart can be a strange thing, out of our control, a war between what we know to be true and what our heart has to say to us. very good write :)

[Brandon Mathis]

thank you this is how my dad is making me feel right now

[quixotic_rose]

terrible. Its family that should give unconditional love, no matter the circumstance.

[Brandon Mathis]

not to my dad he has his priorities fucked up

[quixotic_rose]

i can tell