World of Wonders

Extremely different from what i usually do, tell me what you think of it an please be honest.

Lift me up to the sky

I want to see the clouds smile

I want to fly with a shooting star

And I want to dance with the sun

 

Bring me back to life

As I touch the ground

The birds are all around

As they dig for worms in the dirt

The leaves fall from the trees

And they start to cry

 

The smell of flowers in the distance

It’s like my nose has been enhanced

As they speak to me

It is so enchanting

How their nectar is for the bees

And they keep their nests in newly leaved trees

 

The trees are brought back to life

As I am lifting back to the sky

I seen the clouds smile at me

As I blew a kiss to the sun

I start to realize who I was

I am a shooting star

That got a chance to feel of a heart

 

This earth has been so kind to me

As I fly around in circles

I watch over your world

I give your tree life

I give your birds worms to eat

It is so beautiful, this circle of life

Reviews

[afra]

the first stanza was excellent ....i love it ...well done

[Brandon Mathis]

thank you

[quixotic_rose]

This is excellent! the detailed essence of nature and life in general is truly a beautiful thing to behold. Nicely done :)

[Brandon Mathis]

thank you very much

[Crimson Bayonet]

Brilliant poem. Very detailed. :)

[Brandon Mathis]

thank you very much