Karma

Nothing is what I have become

Every day I become more undone

I’m stuck in this cold

And the sun has shunned me out

I bet you want to say, “I told you so”,

 

But you can’t break me

Not yet at least

I know who you are

You are the ones with the cold dead hearts

You think that you’re above everyone

Take a look in the mirror and see

Who have you really become?

 

You can use your words to hurt

But when you have long abandoned me

Way before you crushed my world

My heart bleeds to every word,

That you think you need to speak

But in the end karma will make you burn

 

Look at what I have become

I have overcome,

The love that you shun

I have reached to the sun

And it forgave me

For whom I once was

I just wish that you weren’t too blind to see

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[Lost in Wonderland]

"You can use your words to hurt

But when you have long abandoned me

Way before you crushed my world

My heart bleeds to every word,

That you think you need to speak

But in the end karma will make you burn


Look at what I have become

I have overcome,

The love that you shun

I have reached to the sun

And it forgave me

For whom I once was

I just wish that you weren’t too blind to see"
I really just could see shouting those lines to a certain person haha! Great poem with a nice concept! Lovely addition as always Brandon
God Bless

[Brandon Mathis]

you hit right on the point

[afra]

another awesome write ...absolutely loved it ..well done

[Brandon Mathis]

thank you very much

[quixotic_rose]

It was an interesting view on things that's for sure. karma can come back at you in life, always watch out for it! when you least expect it, it just leaps out at you. good piece!

[Brandon Mathis]

thank you

[Crimson Bayonet]

Great job! :)

[Brandon Mathis]

thank you

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

Another poignant work.

[Brandon Mathis]

thank you

[kublakhan27]

You have a knack for knowing when and when not to rhyme for the sake of flow...this is one of the better examples of that^^

[Brandon Mathis]

thank you