Cold stone mask

This was written about a guy that has a big impact on who I am today.

You kick me when i'm down,

you come around at the worst times,

but worst of all you give me another reason to love you

when I start to fall out of love.

That day is in the past but it haunts me like it's today.

My tough exterior has you to blame,

although you can see right through it.

Im sensitive but i'm scared to show it

thinking that they will take advantage of how I feel

like you did.

You made me build a wall.

It is unclimable and unreachable.

I constantly push out the people who are closest to me

I dont want them to see.

afraid that if they do

my exterior will no longer protect me.

 

 

 

Author's Note

This was not carefully written I just jotted down what came to mind at the time.

Reviews

[Str8jacket]

I know exactly how you feel. But I've some people are worth the risk. Usually they are the ones who come back after you push them, say it's okay, and they love you anyway, and if you did it again, would still do the same....

[lori c]

i know where you are going with this, but i was a bit puzzled by the last line,,,it seems as if people are already seeing your stone cold mask cause you wont let them in. are you sure that's not what you want them to see or is it your vulnerability that youre afraid to expose.? this is a great premise and good start. i am just a bit confused on this point, but then again, its your heart...let me know if you edit it at any time, i'd like to read it again.

[Kelsie :]]

okay..i love where you are going with this. if i were you i would re-read it and re-write it. take out words that arnt needed. you will find that it will flow alot smoother! keep working on it and let me know if you need help :)