Writing..

just some thoughts..i think this should be an article ,but however ,just thoughts how to write words that amaze your reader

about writing..
ha ha,i have so much that i could tell,but the last few days and months were like hell here
so instead i reviewed a lot..here is what i ve seen..lots had great style ,i swear for i know
some day they will get somewhere,and i ve witnessed others and they got somewhere
some stories i read were great,only the missed the professional touch for a writing
there in them stories were just a sequence of feelings and thought..there was no epic..
no sudden turns and twists and bends around corners here and there
i,for one always look for surprises and something to get to me
to thrill and intrigue me in a way that pulls me to keep reading
and i want to come out of whats reading with something new
something i ve not felt before..make my feet lose weight
like fly a little,and feel so different,that even if a bomb ignites near me
(and so much did ignite near me,ha ha,it truth),even then i will keep
reading ,something i will not forget for months and years..and i ve read here pieces so many like that before,thats why i had faith in this place..i would like to help..
the writing should have a plot ,a style..and brand new thoughts
and craftsmanship..like what i told about planting tricks and thrills
bends and twists..dramatize dear all the way..keep your reader off his foot
all the time he is reading..so even if there were mishaps here and there
he will never notice for he just want to reach the end..never lets him find it
even to the end ..if you have to ..just say -to be continued...ha ha

Author's Note

whatever

Reviews

[emmajoy]

You see what each of us sees, words that draw the reader closer to the subject of the poem or prose, scenes that captivate or surprise, or, sadly, leave one wanting more or differently. You've had such a long time in the Cafe and have surely discovered favourites and not so favourite ..

This is such an interesting piece of writing, it's good to know how you see the words we all set out for others to read, and, of course, each for him or her self. Thank you.

[Akash gaikwad]

Thanks!! I write most of my stories to express myself but writing it from an readers view is important too. Will keep some advice in my mind while writing!! Thank you!!

[bluessadmood]

so glad you agree,and thank you for reading

[Alex Falkner]

I have read quite a few stories on this site, a lot of them, like you said above, are good, just missing the professional touch, sometimes that is a good thing, if it's too professional, it's lacking too much grit and honesty.

Tammy.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

very interesting thoughts, well presented. I checked out your blog........I really like it.