LAND OF POETRY

how once we ve seen and lived there,like magic

long ago we all like never talked ,all smiling and hearts full of joy
its like all whispering,and when we talked it was like sweet poetry
it was like the sun never left,our horizen would never fall
back then we knew such strength and confidence
everything seems just right and fell to the right place
nothing was out of place like all was pretty arranged by some powers
from deep our minds,and eyes so stern and yet light fully  showing
everything looked so bright and joyful,like energy coming from inside
it will never fade or stops always shedding some hidden strength
and deep content within all..by then the words came flowing so at ease like
we were in another world strange and standing all by itself ,how great

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Author's Note

inspired by a writing from a friend..Neva Flores - Changefulstorm..Fill This Old House With Poetry,i just loved her writing

Reviews

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

thank you so much for this.......you understood my poem well. Yes, so many are within their homes happy then time goes by and things change and you look at each other and wonder what happened. You ask where is the love, where has the beautiful poetry we made gone to...........this is lovely.

[MOON]

Beautiful , the loss of innocence in a way.