Writing

Thoughts on writing..its like a lecture ,i think its stupid,hope you like

walk on by me ..i will show you lands i ve seen,lives i tried,pains and joys i lived
want to give you a hint of some very different life,you ve never seen before
i will take you high from earth you ve been rooted to ,for too long
then i would love to just let you go ,see if you crash,or come all unharmed
i want you to walk in my shoes for a while and tell me how it feels
for me it ached a lot ,very little joy i felt,but then the journey on whole
was worth while..i want you to see and let me know how it sounded to you
its what i do ,i build up dreams from nothing,and smash them to pieces
its what i do..then i build some others just to see if i am getting any better
i never cared for this life,i just use the roads to take a different turn
every time i liked,i want to switch to speads ,fast and slow
just to feel ,everything different is what i seak
for really i dont want a thing ..i just need to feel different every moment in life
joy and sadness are nothing  ,they are just  two extremes..life and death
are nothing..for lots that are living ,they dont know they are dead long time ago
i want to show you all this..and i want you tell me what you see..now its your turn

Author's Note

I am not sure..

Reviews

[Alex Falkner]

After reading this piece, I had a look at your profile.
The reason for this is the fact I strongly relate to it, I have had a very hard life, however mine is nothing like yours, the bombs going off around me were merely emotional outbursts from family members, somewhat trivial compared to what you deal with daily.
I found this very well written and I enjoyed reading it, (three times now trying to find something to critique, found nothing)
Thank you for sharing this, and I will be reading your other works as I get the time.

[bluessadmood]

thank you so much ,yes i liked this piece too,now that i read it,i assure you it reflects who i am really,so so glad you liked it,felt so happy at what you said.

[JenniferMarie]

I like its meditative quality. It makes you think and I enjoy that about this writing.

[bluessadmood]

thank you so much,what nice words you said here..

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

This shows a strength that most people don't acquire in an entire lifetime. There is wisdom here and purely empathetic moments that just really show your quality as a person. I'm impressed with how you express your emotions.

[bluessadmood]

thank you so much,i am both glad and proud with this compliment coming from a lovely poet,great poet really

[jessdixon]

I like the stream of consciousness style of this poem, like you are trying to work out your approach on life as you write. You create some beautiful images and thoughts. I'm inspired to write a poem about my view life, too!

[Desert Dreamer]

When we stop experiencing the full range of human emotions and possibilities, that is when we stop living...some people have truly become dead long ago, it sounds like you long to live. Very poetic and meaningful.

[Bubo]

Yes, you display a need to explore, not to simply live and then die.......your mind is strong, and this is good, we all want to feel different things.......but so many emotions make us who we are........the joy of love, birth, friendships, and the pain of death, loss and suffering........inbetween we build, learn and gain wisdom, understanding that the world is ours if we simply respect it and take all those opportunities presented..........Very touching write.

[Wondering Mind]

What aren't you sure about, my friend?.....This is what writing is all about..The heart and mind of the writer, and you have a warm and wonderful heart, and an open mind for discovery..to explore...we can all get hold of a thesaurus and dictionary..but to have a pure heart and beautiful soul...those are gifts that only a few have the fortune to have, and you have them both.