Never Believed In Supermen

just thoughts..dreamy thoughts

 

The sky was  so cloudy like my mind..So many bright visions kept coming and going..

 

Could see so many people here and there..Loved the way they walked,like all lost..Like nothing..

 

Thoughts of you always run to my mind,never stopping..I remember everything.. you pacify my mind..You make me think again that the rain and sun,night and day could come again right at once for you changed all the rules ,its you who make them now..times in the snow I could feel so warm..

                 In the darkest of nights I could see bright days, in the skies I could see even the stars, you make me think that life is never silly..No matter how everything looks so sad, I could still see your smile..                                    I never believed in supermen until I saw you, no one could bring a smile onto a sad face but you..no one could bring the rains and the sun and rainbow, fill the skies with colors,yet not as beautiful as your eyes though ,you could do all that.. no one could wipe all the pains out of the saddest of hearts, and fill them with joy with just a look from those eyes, with just a smile from that face , telling me everything is all right, I don’t think there is any power greater than you..you change the dark into light, clouds into something so bright..you bring sweet dreams in the midst of day so I don’t have to sleep my nights..you show me rainbows anytime you like..you touch my face ,and close my eyes, so I can see you much better, you would do everything so it looks like heavens..you took me there always ,but all the way I knew its you being near.. that make it like the  sweetest heavens..

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Fran Marie]

Glad to come across this oldie
but goodie certain people have
a magical power with their eyes
shining and a smile to cheer you up
just like believing in superhero powers
yeah love is like that .it can bring us
to the clouds of heaven ..such a lovely
poetic piece here Blues..well done;

[bluessadmood]

hello dear lady , how are you, so grateful for your lovely words, I see you are still active here..so happy seeing you around

[Fran Marie]

yes dear friend still writing or at least trying to, he years have rolled by 14 years
here this August..hope you are well..

[Shannon Carinne Sparks]

The phrases are like fingers they run along your skin and grab at your hair. They are little memories, little caresses. It touches your senses; I love it, but then I usually like your work;)

[ElizabethAnn]

it's a fresh perspective on what makes a hero a hero.
this is a nice and telling write--shows a bit of your soul.
i like the format...or the lack thereof..how you give glimpses at the beginning and keep them spaced out.
it's not your most amazing work, but it's still good. good job :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

All it takes is that one special person to make us believe in things we never did... a beautiful and romantic write.

[Vanessa Whiteley]

This is so romantic. The reader just gets swept along with these beautiful words. The extract I have chosen below is perhaps too long but It is difficult to choose a favourite part as it is all so touching.

I never believed in supermen until I saw you, no one could bring a smile onto a sad face but you..no one could bring the rains and the sun and rainbow, fill the skies with colors,yet not as beautiful as your eyes though ,you could do all that.. no one could wipe all the pains out of the saddest of hearts, and fill them with joy with just a look from those eyes, with just a smile from that face , telling me everything is all right, I don't think there is any power greater than you

[Vanessa Whiteley]

This is so romantic. The reader just gets swept along with these beautiful words. The extract I have chosen below is perhaps too long but It is difficult to choose a favourite part as it is all so touching.

I never believed in supermen until I saw you, no one could bring a smile onto a sad face but you..no one could bring the rains and the sun and rainbow, fill the skies with colors,yet not as beautiful as your eyes though ,you could do all that.. no one could wipe all the pains out of the saddest of hearts, and fill them with joy with just a look from those eyes, with just a smile from that face , telling me everything is all right, I don't think there is any power greater than you

[Vanessa Whiteley]

This is so romantic. The reader just gets swept along with these beautiful words.

I never believed in supermen until I saw you, no one could bring a smile onto a sad face but you..no one could bring the rains and the sun and rainbow, fill the skies with colors,yet not as beautiful as your eyes though ,you could do all that.. no one could wipe all the pains out of the saddest of hearts, and fill them with joy with just a look from those eyes, with just a smile from that face , telling me everything is all right, I don't think there is any power greater than you

[Winter McPherson]

Beautifully romantic! Such sweet sentiment. They way you express your love and admiration for the beloved is superb! I loved it!

[Sel Whiteley]

Firstly, I loved the title of this piece, it is so engaging. It is so brilliant to have that one person who changes the direction of your life, who, as you say, 'makes the rules'. You capture the near divinity of your friend that, 'all the way I knew its you being near.. that make it like the sweetest heavens..' what emotion from a beautiful heart.

[shythatway]

Well, who needs supermen when there are so much more amazing things in this world; that we can find within very real people. *smile* I loved this.

[Helena]

Oh such sweet dreamy thoughts.....
It had such a gentleness and serenity to it.....a mistiness
about it and hope shining through the darkness.

I loved it! Very well done indeed Moayad.

Kind regards
Helena