Never Believed In Supermen

just thoughts..dreamy thoughts

 

The sky was  so cloudy like my mind..So many bright visions kept coming and going..

 

Could see so many people here and there..Loved the way they walked,like all lost..Like nothing..

 

Thoughts of you always run to my mind,never stopping..I remember everything.. you pacify my mind..You make me think again that the rain and sun,night and day could come again right at once for you changed all the rules ,its you who make them now..times in the snow I could feel so warm..

                 In the darkest of nights I could see bright days, in the skies I could see even the stars, you make me think that life is never silly..No matter how everything looks so sad, I could still see your smile..                                    I never believed in supermen until I saw you, no one could bring a smile onto a sad face but you..no one could bring the rains and the sun and rainbow, fill the skies with colors,yet not as beautiful as your eyes though ,you could do all that.. no one could wipe all the pains out of the saddest of hearts, and fill them with joy with just a look from those eyes, with just a smile from that face , telling me everything is all right, I don’t think there is any power greater than you..you change the dark into light, clouds into something so bright..you bring sweet dreams in the midst of day so I don’t have to sleep my nights..you show me rainbows anytime you like..you touch my face ,and close my eyes, so I can see you much better, you would do everything so it looks like heavens..you took me there always ,but all the way I knew its you being near.. that make it like the  sweetest heavens..

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Fran Marie]

Glad to come across this oldie
but goodie certain people have
a magical power with their eyes
shining and a smile to cheer you up
just like believing in superhero powers
yeah love is like that .it can bring us
to the clouds of heaven ..such a lovely
poetic piece here Blues..well done;

[bluessadmood]

hello dear lady , how are you, so grateful for your lovely words, I see you are still active here..so happy seeing you around

[Fran Marie]

yes dear friend still writing or at least trying to, he years have rolled by 14 years
here this August..hope you are well..

[Ellen Hammond]

This is beautiful! You tenderly express so much love and emotion in this lovely sentimental piece. I really enjoyed reading this, my friend.

[MagiCrystal]

lol... this is forever..100 % magical

[Ladysue]

This is extremely beautiful. I agree with Helen, you do have a tender voice here. You captured the power of love in this piece. Lovely and wonderfully expressed...

[Dressed in Poetry]

I love this! It is very beautiful. The major suggestion I would make is that instead of periods, make a line break and create a poem-like structure, because this flows so much like a poem. I think that would be a very interesting thing to do to it.

[Stacey Watts]

Very beautiful piece. Nicely written and a truly romantic tones. Grat job. It was a very tender write.

[Wicahpi]

This is an expressive write of wonderment through the eyes of someone's love. Even in darkness, sadness there's rays of light and vision of purity when one feels the warm of love. I enjoyed reading this.

Peace n Light!

[emmajoy]

You've written such tender words here.. it's as if you've turned your heart inside out to show someone exactly who you are and what you feel. The thought of a loved one being like superman is quite a thought.. shows the respect of and the trust in that person.

And there's amazing peace and beauty shared: 'you bring sweet dreams in the midst of day so I don't have to sleep my nights.'

This is very beautiful and a poem to remember. Thank you for sharing

[Lauren Marie]

Loved the lyricism and the emotion in this piece!
There is nothing else for me to say.
This was -such- a lovely piece!!
~Lauren

[dark and twisty]

interesting i thought....the yearning, the longing, the relief that is sought in other person's presence and embrace all very evident in the piece...only problem was the grammer, the constant commas and never ending sentence but it wasn't so much a problem here as in your other pieces..

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"Never Believed in Supermen" The title is what drew me in. It wasn't quite what I expected; a very personal and beautiful prose indeed. It seems love came into your life and opened your eyes to something surreal. You began to view your surroundings from a different, much brighter perspective. Ah, love certainly holds a power unlike no other. Very lovely.