Never Believed In Supermen

just thoughts..dreamy thoughts

 

The sky was  so cloudy like my mind..So many bright visions kept coming and going..

 

Could see so many people here and there..Loved the way they walked,like all lost..Like nothing..

 

Thoughts of you always run to my mind,never stopping..I remember everything.. you pacify my mind..You make me think again that the rain and sun,night and day could come again right at once for you changed all the rules ,its you who make them now..times in the snow I could feel so warm..

                 In the darkest of nights I could see bright days, in the skies I could see even the stars, you make me think that life is never silly..No matter how everything looks so sad, I could still see your smile..                                    I never believed in supermen until I saw you, no one could bring a smile onto a sad face but you..no one could bring the rains and the sun and rainbow, fill the skies with colors,yet not as beautiful as your eyes though ,you could do all that.. no one could wipe all the pains out of the saddest of hearts, and fill them with joy with just a look from those eyes, with just a smile from that face , telling me everything is all right, I don’t think there is any power greater than you..you change the dark into light, clouds into something so bright..you bring sweet dreams in the midst of day so I don’t have to sleep my nights..you show me rainbows anytime you like..you touch my face ,and close my eyes, so I can see you much better, you would do everything so it looks like heavens..you took me there always ,but all the way I knew its you being near.. that make it like the  sweetest heavens..

 

Author's Note

whatever

Reviews

[Fran Marie]

Glad to come across this oldie
but goodie certain people have
a magical power with their eyes
shining and a smile to cheer you up
just like believing in superhero powers
yeah love is like that .it can bring us
to the clouds of heaven ..such a lovely
poetic piece here Blues..well done;

[bluessadmood]

hello dear lady , how are you, so grateful for your lovely words, I see you are still active here..so happy seeing you around

[Fran Marie]

yes dear friend still writing or at least trying to, he years have rolled by 14 years
here this August..hope you are well..

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

i see 'whatever' is universal lol
no , i would say such a beautiful thing to read your thoughts here.
yes, your soul does show as a.a. has said, and it is golden.
lovely writing.

[Cherrie Palmer]

it is amazing the strength you can get from a smile :)

[Goodbye]

I hope your electricity gets back on soon. But it seems as though the electricity inside is working just fine. This is so amazingly loving and romantic...sigh...

[Kate Hunter]

it was very well written. flowed well, vivid imagination and great word usage. Nice job.

[Emily Filkins]

"whatever?" Uhh, no.
I loved this :D
Good flow, very detailed,
nice job:)

[cfix]

This is beautiful , such a heart filled write. Touching and sincere!

[Emily B]

oh, these are wonderful words

[A.A.Romanczuk]

Whatever? Oh no...far from it, dear Blues...why this is...oh..it is..bewitching..enchanting..charming..endearing...darling..beautiful...oh it is words that have not yet been invented....I see your soul..the depths of your heart..this is sweetness unmeasurable...what a sincere, lovely dedication to someone...how wonderful to have such a someone...astonishing...stunning..this is...truly beautiful..

[Lady Lazarus.]

'no one could wipe all the pains out of the saddest of hearts, and fill them with joy with just a look from those eyes'
such a perfect line...
a great view of love and how it can make everything clearer and easier and hope filled.

[cheeeeese]

Beautiful piece, and very sincere. Also somewhat magical :) You overflowed this piece with emotion, and that was what made it great. Wonderful job.