Never Believed In Supermen

just thoughts..dreamy thoughts

 

The sky was  so cloudy like my mind..So many bright visions kept coming and going..

 

Could see so many people here and there..Loved the way they walked,like all lost..Like nothing..

 

Thoughts of you always run to my mind,never stopping..I remember everything.. you pacify my mind..You make me think again that the rain and sun,night and day could come again right at once for you changed all the rules ,its you who make them now..times in the snow I could feel so warm..

                 In the darkest of nights I could see bright days, in the skies I could see even the stars, you make me think that life is never silly..No matter how everything looks so sad, I could still see your smile..                                    I never believed in supermen until I saw you, no one could bring a smile onto a sad face but you..no one could bring the rains and the sun and rainbow, fill the skies with colors,yet not as beautiful as your eyes though ,you could do all that.. no one could wipe all the pains out of the saddest of hearts, and fill them with joy with just a look from those eyes, with just a smile from that face , telling me everything is all right, I don’t think there is any power greater than you..you change the dark into light, clouds into something so bright..you bring sweet dreams in the midst of day so I don’t have to sleep my nights..you show me rainbows anytime you like..you touch my face ,and close my eyes, so I can see you much better, you would do everything so it looks like heavens..you took me there always ,but all the way I knew its you being near.. that make it like the  sweetest heavens..

 

Author's Note

whatever

Reviews

[Fran Marie]

Glad to come across this oldie
but goodie certain people have
a magical power with their eyes
shining and a smile to cheer you up
just like believing in superhero powers
yeah love is like that .it can bring us
to the clouds of heaven ..such a lovely
poetic piece here Blues..well done;

[bluessadmood]

hello dear lady , how are you, so grateful for your lovely words, I see you are still active here..so happy seeing you around

[Fran Marie]

yes dear friend still writing or at least trying to, he years have rolled by 14 years
here this August..hope you are well..

[MAC]

to be somebody's superhero...wow!! what a great write!

[Liza]

beautiful, absolutely brilliant; the divine within us all beating - don't look up at the sky for your hero - see the eyes of of love walking on earth - heaven on earth - a soothing read.

[.......]

This is beuatiful yet sad as well.
We all need our super hero's
very well written.

[Cynthia]

Lovely! Superheroes, don't we all have one? Like our heroes, who we admire, who we trust, to us, they're all our very own superhero :) I love how you describe the superhero, to bring a smile to everyone. That will be the best power in this world! to make someone laugh when they're down!
Nice Written!

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[arbitrary jane]

sometimes, though, life is kind of silly. ... a little.

[O!]

I still dont believe in anything SUPER....but right now......hmmmm...i guess its something ive yet to feel.

Ty.

x,
O!

[Helen Crutchett]

I loved these dreamy thoughts of yours. Romantic and sweet. Thanks for sharing.

[Celtic Cat]

wipe that whatever off this page! that was beautiful and lovely and the stuff that keeps men from going mad. Not just men, of course, mankind.. we all need a dream and a memory and a reason to hold on. It is a sad and hopeless world, I know, but every once in a while, as you show, heaven breaks through and we can smile through the mayhem for once. I love this piece, I think perhaps one of my favorites.