Never Believed In Supermen

just thoughts..dreamy thoughts

 

The sky was  so cloudy like my mind..So many bright visions kept coming and going..

 

Could see so many people here and there..Loved the way they walked,like all lost..Like nothing..

 

Thoughts of you always run to my mind,never stopping..I remember everything.. you pacify my mind..You make me think again that the rain and sun,night and day could come again right at once for you changed all the rules ,its you who make them now..times in the snow I could feel so warm..

                 In the darkest of nights I could see bright days, in the skies I could see even the stars, you make me think that life is never silly..No matter how everything looks so sad, I could still see your smile..                                    I never believed in supermen until I saw you, no one could bring a smile onto a sad face but you..no one could bring the rains and the sun and rainbow, fill the skies with colors,yet not as beautiful as your eyes though ,you could do all that.. no one could wipe all the pains out of the saddest of hearts, and fill them with joy with just a look from those eyes, with just a smile from that face , telling me everything is all right, I don’t think there is any power greater than you..you change the dark into light, clouds into something so bright..you bring sweet dreams in the midst of day so I don’t have to sleep my nights..you show me rainbows anytime you like..you touch my face ,and close my eyes, so I can see you much better, you would do everything so it looks like heavens..you took me there always ,but all the way I knew its you being near.. that make it like the  sweetest heavens..

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Fran Marie]

Glad to come across this oldie
but goodie certain people have
a magical power with their eyes
shining and a smile to cheer you up
just like believing in superhero powers
yeah love is like that .it can bring us
to the clouds of heaven ..such a lovely
poetic piece here Blues..well done;

[bluessadmood]

hello dear lady , how are you, so grateful for your lovely words, I see you are still active here..so happy seeing you around

[Fran Marie]

yes dear friend still writing or at least trying to, he years have rolled by 14 years
here this August..hope you are well..

[Robert Haigh]

Love is wonderful, when it works! May it keep on working!

[bluessadmood]

yes for sure love is wonderful

[light and ashes]

It needs minimal editing, but it's really good. I really like your style of writing. I enjoyed reading this.

[bluessadmood]

thank you so much..so glad you liked it

[light and ashes]

You're welcome.

[yashmita13]

epic...simply beautiful. love it

[bluessadmood]

thank you so much ,

[Zahra]

A nice short story.

[bluessadmood]

thank you for that..she could do even more,,ha ha

[Barbara Walker]

Your emotions just pour out in this piece. It's as if i am inside your head while you are thinking all of these thoughts! Very descriptive! Great write!

[JadeForever]

:D good descriptive word choice!

[moonbeam40]

Beautifully written , it would be great to meet a superman one that could fly and zoom right off this planet into orbit, and explore the Universe, great poem. sent my mind into space and other worlds. Moonbeam.

[Joiedevivre]

strong write, I love the softer ending.

[J. Marc]

Sweet! And yet one cannot help asking what happened? There seems also to be a nostalgic note in those wonderful words, as if all those sweet moments you fear will never come again.....