Your Love Torture Me

too much emotions put in a poem..I am never good at poetry..ha ha Some thoughts just wanted to get out,so i let them out ,ha ha

 

You brought me to life,and what life

You showed me beauties,i longed to see

Tell me how you manage this ,i really lost my way

Is there no way out of you,you really trapped me in this

Tell me is your love was made to torment ,but love the way you do it

Please never stop..I like the way you torture me

You brought a new meaning to love,your words showed some new lives

Wonder how you do it..magician surely you are

You haunted me day and night..is there no way to cut you out

How sweet everything is about you,even with the pains and aches you bring

How you play with my heart ..but I feel it as the biggest pleasure I ever known

What are ,who are you,those words and thoughts shook my world,my whole being

Thoughts of you jump to my mind all the time..is just there no cure from you

 

Author's Note

no rules what so ever

Reviews

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Wow... simply love the honesty in your emotions.. we are many things as people.. it's a daily struggle.. good and bad.. some people pull us like magnets and I have felt that affect a time or too. Part of being human is having so many emotions, feelings and beliefs.. we fall.. get up.. there are no rules when it comes to matters of the heart.. we can only feel what is true to us and our surroundings.. but still hold high a dream.. a fantasy.. a belief.. a love.. a passion.. you display you have lost your way.. many have.. I have more than once.. part of being human. Your surroundings displayed; through what you have written previously; shows it would be very easy to lose your way.. being in such harsh territory. I am glad you found someone who still challenges your being.. for that is life itself through living and those we know and hold dear. Love can be such torment.. and joy.. and so many things!!! Thank you for sharing... love your honesty my friend and may your heart find peace, understanding and it's own divine love! Myself I chose to end my days in peace and love even though it pains sometimes! =)

[Ladysue]

Wow, this is exquisite and so beautifully described. that is exactly how it is. wonderful job capturing it!

[Just Charles]

Love is addictive indeed. That's what I get out of this poem. Good write!!!

[Fran Marie]

What are ,who are you,those words and thoughts shook my world,my whole beingThoughts of you jump to my mind all the time..is just there no cure from you

What deep emotions spring forth in this lovely piece expressed quite
vividly in honest reactions to another's words/love~ sometimes, we seemed
hypnotized and fully caught up in the passion of all that is offered, even
if it be torture, it all plays a balanced part

Great Pen!! my friend

[Wicahpi]

love can be torture, that is for sure.

[Brittany]

This piece is so soulful, beautiful, elegant.

It has the tones of a deep sigh, a shoulder-shrug, a nonchalance (I doubt I spelt that correctly)... Like you've given in and accepted that there is just no escape from your love.

Excellent write.

[Shadow Writer]

Reminds me of the song, "Hurts So Good". Love can be painful for sure, but then again what true sadness and pain there would be if we didn't have it. Enjoyed the write. Phantom............

[Joel Alvarado]

Very raw and real. This is very enjoyable and I can relate because I came out of a relationship similar to that not so long ago. Where I couldn't escape the endless frustration and disappointment but I didnt want to leave because it was all I knew. Nicely penned and great job!

[Anna]

I love the free expression of how you REALLY feel come out here. No fluff. Just emotion.
love it!

[Padma]

I like the way this poem describes the sweet agony of a lover.....but am sure this is just the beginning of love...for,one doesn't keep on suffering always,he/she starts to take revenge.hahaha... just kidding. THese feelings are very true.....and you have beautifully weaved them into a poem.

[♡Moon Child♡..]

Wow...that made me cry a little. Such emotion packed into just a few lines...v.v