I shine only for you

i am not really a poet i mostly write short stories ..i am posting this ..its a review to a dear friend who asked me to post it as a poem ..i am doing as she wishes

i call you by so many names ..but they are all the same
in your arms i feel love like i never felt..my whole life
at nights you by my side ..nothing takes you away from me
when i am lost ..i lean on you ..you offer all the answers..and i lay back just like a queen
when at times i am afraid of life..my hero the brave will always drive harm away
when i am weak and never knowing what to do..you are always there to take the lead to the safe shores..with me
you always make life good and sweet for me..taking lots of care of me
and after a long day ..feeling it too much for me
i whisper ..i love you dear

Author's Note

i hope it looks good..this was a review ..now its a poem ha ha

Reviews

[Brjden (Bridge-Den) Cre..]

Beautifully written. That has to be the best review anyone has ever gotten here! Very heartfelt and you can tell by how common the conversation is, that it's sincere. I don't know the nature of your relationship with this person, but it's obviously strong and loving to have inspired such words to describe it!

"i call you by so many names ..but they are all the same
in your arms i feel love like i never felt..my whole life
at nights you by my side ..nothing takes you away from me
when i am lost ..i lean on you ..you offer all the answers..and i lay back just like a queen"

I find it hard to believe good writers when they say "they're not really poets". I think poets are writers who convey creative writings in ALL forms, and they do it with emotion and perspective scenery. You may need to look both ways because if not, someone will actually read these words, and call you a poet! I know I just did......

[Emily B]

lovely, shining words. Thank you for sharing them with us here.

[The DuchessPoet]

Um...
Nothing is more fulfilling then the warmth and security of love...
Your words paint the picture of a man coming home, from the outside world, to enjoy the comfort of his beloved... What a wonderful feeling this poem reveals...
Your words:
"you always make life good and sweet for me..taking lots of care of me
and after a long day ..feeling it too much for me
i whisper ..i love you dear"

I love this, my dear friend!
I really do!

[Angel Baby]

Aww this brought a few *tears* to my eyes, so beautifully written. Just like your reviews this is amazing. You are a POET in every sense of the word as you write from your heart. I look forward to reading more of your beautiful work. Hugs~ P.W.

[Helena]

Well my dear friend, I think you can call yourself poet now!
Ohh it looked so good, in fact the words were so beautiful and touching...

"you always make life good and sweet for me..taking lots of care of me
and after a long day ..feeling it too much for me
i whisper ..i love you dear"

Wonderful poem! Keep up the awesome work!

Helena

[Celtic Cat]

Very, very sweet!! Ahhh... nothing like these feelings here!! Nice poem!!!!

[emmajoy]

Such a sensitive poem... full of warmth and love. It's so good to see you write like this, gentle and calm, full of good emotions.

[Sheila Kline]

Hey There....of course it looks good....look what inspired it! (smiles)
I am flattered that you have written this from ~I Shine For You~...it shows your ability to read the work of another poet, and then express it as you feel it!....ah, the emotion of love!
Well done, and an enjoyble write!!.......and see, you already have nice comments about it!!
Sheila

[TripleCK]

This makes me think of the one i love. this is very very good. i agree with the review before mine: calm

[Adelia Alighieri]

Aww...it's so heart touching...so calmly and delicately written...
Made me smile and my eyes twinkle... *-)