I shine only for you

i am not really a poet i mostly write short stories ..i am posting this ..its a review to a dear friend who asked me to post it as a poem ..i am doing as she wishes

i call you by so many names ..but they are all the same
in your arms i feel love like i never felt..my whole life
at nights you by my side ..nothing takes you away from me
when i am lost ..i lean on you ..you offer all the answers..and i lay back just like a queen
when at times i am afraid of life..my hero the brave will always drive harm away
when i am weak and never knowing what to do..you are always there to take the lead to the safe shores..with me
you always make life good and sweet for me..taking lots of care of me
and after a long day ..feeling it too much for me
i whisper ..i love you dear

Author's Note

i hope it looks good..this was a review ..now its a poem ha ha

Reviews

[Brjden (Bridge-Den) Cre..]

Beautifully written. That has to be the best review anyone has ever gotten here! Very heartfelt and you can tell by how common the conversation is, that it's sincere. I don't know the nature of your relationship with this person, but it's obviously strong and loving to have inspired such words to describe it!

"i call you by so many names ..but they are all the same
in your arms i feel love like i never felt..my whole life
at nights you by my side ..nothing takes you away from me
when i am lost ..i lean on you ..you offer all the answers..and i lay back just like a queen"

I find it hard to believe good writers when they say "they're not really poets". I think poets are writers who convey creative writings in ALL forms, and they do it with emotion and perspective scenery. You may need to look both ways because if not, someone will actually read these words, and call you a poet! I know I just did......

[Tessa]

WRITE MORE POEMS DEAR!!!! Explore every option, you have a way with words of so many different types. Your writings have always spoken to me with true inspiration.

[A.A.Romanczuk]

Oh..how darling of You...this poem has honey weaved into its core...I would tell You my favorite lines, Blues...but the thing is...they're all so beautiful...I..love..this. oh...how beautiful...

[Tina Kline]

Very beautiful. Shows so much love and caring, I think this is fantastic! Very impressive!

[Jennifer Marie Theresa ..]

I can relate so much to this poem you have no idea and it speaks to me. That's the art of poetry.

[Janice]

"I call you by so many names ..but they are all the same" This is my favorite line. Something about it stuck with me, and that's what writing and poetry is all about. The rest was wonderful as well, I truly enjoyed it. What a kind review, as always! You write from the heart, even in your wonderful reviews.
She must be very special to you. I'm happy you found comfort in her and with your writing as well!
Keep your pen flowing, it moves me!

[Jenny-Jen-Jen]

This is a great write.
Same feel to one of your other poems, but somehow this poem is different.
And that is good. Being able to write on the same subject while having your pieces differ
is a very hard for some, but a good tool as a writer.

Lovely.

[Sel Whiteley]

A beautiful, sensitive portrayal of love, and very artful depiction of the persona's lover.

[Gheeneil]

When we call someone by different names and if they seem to sound the same, that is, referring to same person, then, I say, those are but terms of endearment. This is such a lovely and refreshing piece. It warms the heart and inspires the soul.

[Anastasia Starlena]

Very beautiful piece. Very captivating piece a true work of art .

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I think you are a better poet then you think... this is really incredible.