Peace

this message is full of love ,its not what it seems ,there is no hatred in it whatsoever,i just want the madness to stop ,i want love to come over again,the world is getting sick we need to get more rational,this hatred is getting us nowhere,it has to sto

oh peace what a wonderful word,we all sing of it

peace be with you

may rest in eternal peace

have a peaceful day

so peaceful they are

peace,its not just calm and quiet

its respect to humans

i have never seen peace all my life

how i wish to live if only for a few days

but peace was never meant for us

greed is all i knew since young

killing and blood is all i used to see

oh my friends oh how ugly

if you have seen the amount of blood i saw

the many lives i witnessed be taken

lives ...dreams hopes endless thoughts of the future

in a flicker is taken away

life leaving behind so many others

children and wife and home

only used to be home

now its no more

when i walk the streets i see lots of red

so thick it tells how many here just left

but they left behind their flesh so much

every beautiful morning i would go out

to see these mass of flesh heaped in every corner

this is how much man is worth,a heap of flesh

i just look ,never believe my eyes

never seen so many,no move ,no life

i really cry and cry hard

i see faces looking at me eyes not moving

some frozen in a smile,some so frightened

some almost look asleep

others look they once have been so alive

so i turn around and go home till next morning

when i will come out see a new collection

and i marvel at what,at what  this world has come to be

 

 

Author's Note

please do not read this is for me and some others,and very hard on tender nerves
there are no gramar ,spelling very bad

Reviews

[Seashell]

Well i did read this and it fills me with terror. I do hope you experience peace in your life so much !!! Peace is everything that is required to have a happy life. But some folks are not so fortunate to experience it at all...I pray for those.,,every day !!

Thanks for sharing your deep thoughts
Take care
Be safe

Babsie Bee xx

[Ladysue]

An intense and powerful write. Peace has become such a foreign concept in peoples lives and the entire world. I heard today that a Walmart employee was trampled to death when he opened the door for customers this morning. 32 years of age. There is no peace among people anymore. Things are so out of control on so many levels and I loved how you voiced that in your piece. I love the last line. Excellently and beautifully written and a great subject.

[An Ordinary Woman]

Ah, yes the lack of peace is hard to take. The world isn't as it used to be. A painful poem but really well written. I enjoyed it. Thank you.

[J.Black]

when i walk the streets i see lots of red

so thick it tells how many here just left

but they left behind their flesh so much

every beautiful morning i would go out

to see these mass of flesh heaped in every corner

this is how much man is worth,a heap of flesh

i just look ,never believe my eyes

never seen so many,no move ,no life

i really cry and cry hard

i see faces looking at me eyes not moving

some frozen in a smile,some so frightened

some almost look asleep

others look they once have been so alive

so i turn around and go home till next morning

when i will come out see a new collection

and i marvel at what,at what this world has come to be


thought this was very powerful and well written! you have talent! full of emotions.

[~angelalala~]

a powerful piece here. the imagery, emotions is amazing. & the last line sums it up perfectly, "i marvel at what,at what this world has come to be". peace is a powerful word & at times seems unattainable in the world we live in. a beautiful, heart-felt write.

[Adelia Alighieri]

Magnificent...It's simply magnificent...
Peace; I wonder if one day it'll rule the world...Loved the poem..Great job...Especially when you wrote
"i really cry and cry hard
i see faces looking at me eyes not moving
some frozen in a smile,some so frightened
some almost look asleep
others look they once have been so alive"
It was very heart-touching...

[Wondering Mind]

An intense and emotional write. Peace cries bitterly, Earth cries in vain- We humans are the cause of the inhuman pain.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Peace is not the abscence of violence. Peace is tranquility of the mind. I think a philosopher said something like that and if he did not then I did. But just an abscence of violence would be a wonderful thing. tough write for you but well said

[darkgurl]

i really cry and cry hard
i see faces looking at me eyes not moving
some frozen in a smile,some so frightened
some almost look asleep
others look they once have been so alive
so i turn around and go home till next morning
when i will come out see a new collection
and i marvel at what,at what this world has come to be

Oh! These lines moved me, This is a emotional write here and touches the core of the heart....Kim

[Anima Inspired]

The message is there...and the hope for peace is one that I share with you. Perhaps, if only one person at a time, we will slowly realize that we are all flesh and blood with beating hearts...

[Jessica M.]

peace and hope will come someday.