Peace

this message is full of love ,its not what it seems ,there is no hatred in it whatsoever,i just want the madness to stop ,i want love to come over again,the world is getting sick we need to get more rational,this hatred is getting us nowhere,it has to sto

oh peace what a wonderful word,we all sing of it

peace be with you

may rest in eternal peace

have a peaceful day

so peaceful they are

peace,its not just calm and quiet

its respect to humans

i have never seen peace all my life

how i wish to live if only for a few days

but peace was never meant for us

greed is all i knew since young

killing and blood is all i used to see

oh my friends oh how ugly

if you have seen the amount of blood i saw

the many lives i witnessed be taken

lives ...dreams hopes endless thoughts of the future

in a flicker is taken away

life leaving behind so many others

children and wife and home

only used to be home

now its no more

when i walk the streets i see lots of red

so thick it tells how many here just left

but they left behind their flesh so much

every beautiful morning i would go out

to see these mass of flesh heaped in every corner

this is how much man is worth,a heap of flesh

i just look ,never believe my eyes

never seen so many,no move ,no life

i really cry and cry hard

i see faces looking at me eyes not moving

some frozen in a smile,some so frightened

some almost look asleep

others look they once have been so alive

so i turn around and go home till next morning

when i will come out see a new collection

and i marvel at what,at what  this world has come to be

 

 

Author's Note

please do not read this is for me and some others,and very hard on tender nerves
there are no gramar ,spelling very bad

Reviews

[Seashell]

Well i did read this and it fills me with terror. I do hope you experience peace in your life so much !!! Peace is everything that is required to have a happy life. But some folks are not so fortunate to experience it at all...I pray for those.,,every day !!

Thanks for sharing your deep thoughts
Take care
Be safe

Babsie Bee xx

[Poeticpiers]

You make your message very clear to read. Man is and always was mans worst enemy. The absolute predator one of the few who kil;s for pleasure . Peace is an ideal I doubt if I will ever see world wide.

[Poetic82]

Wow, I have come to find that we are placed in our lives for a reason. Though you have witnessed so much, it is to tell their story. For every face you saw...for every dream you had. You keep them alive...You give their lives meaning, the atrocity of a life of greed that leaves others in anguish. You must tell their story. As long as you write and witness, we cannot forget, and we cannot walk away and act as if this never happened. Peace be unto you. Keep peace of mind, peace of heart and peace of self awareness. You will not let it die, because then you would have no peace. Keep writing.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Humanity has become so grey these days... so few want to lend a hand to a stranger or even their neighbor anymore... a wonderful write.

[Brianna Brie]

The way you describe the pile of flesh shows strongly the worlds' lack of value on human life. At the same time it fully makes one aware that yes these were people with lives of their own. Real beings that felt joy, sadness, pain, love and yes, even fear. Wonderfully written...powerful and intensely urgent.

[Rick Puetter]

Dear bluessadmood,

This is a very strong piece. It is full of raw emotion and opens a camera for us into your world. I truly fear that those of us that live in more peaceful parts of the world (like the US) have no real idea of what your day to day life is really like. If we even had the faintest hint our governments would place much more priority on helping. But I think we are blind. Thank you for helping at least some of us (those that read your work) to see more clearly.

Kindest of regards,

Rick

[Taunt-gently]

And I cant sleep more often than not, knowing so many people are in so much pain, knowing so many people have been displaced, knowing I'll never know the sadness of war, but I feel it all the same, it rumbles in the ground and unsteadies my heart to pain, I feel shame.

Peace, so many people want it, I hope you see it soon, I do.
Thank you

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

A very well written poem. I too wish for peace in my lifetime would be so nice. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

[The DuchessPoet]

Wow, I'm speechless... I wanna crawl somewhere and be still.
The thought of what seems like such an inhuman condition...
The hearts that have become barbaric and the souls that execute...
My words can't express the depth of my feelings...
I have no words... just feelings...

Thank you.

[Emily B]

I wish peace for you, Moayad. I wish peace for the many. Is my little light enough to shine all the way to you?

[Ally]

This was great, such amazing emotion,

and i marvel at what,at what this world has come to be

Terrific line in this poem. Amazing. Bravo!