The B***h

please dont read ,this is just for me,its very disgusting

Our life is all disturbed, so why not having it be disturbed more

I like that chaos, lets have some more, it intrigues me, I know I get nauseated, but I like it

I always like my life like that, never knowing where I am going

I like that, I like to feel lost as I was... all through

I like to feel pain, pain so much of it, Pain becomes me

It suits me well, it’s my life my whole life

I like it when it’s sad; I like it when it’s so bad

I like it when I feel disgust all around me

It feels so good; it feels like home, it’s the only home I know

It’s the only home I ever known

Let it come, I like it when it’s dark

I fear the light, it does not becomes me

I like it when I am getting old and rusty

It feels so good, thats how I know life my dear

That’s how I have always known life,

The b***h she is ...life

 

 

Author's Note

its disgusting please dont read ,this is for really

Reviews

[Helena]

Well if someone says don't read....well its human nature to want to take a look!
So taking a look I am doing ! LOL

Such a strong write, and no I didn't find it disgusting at all, just an honest
poem of emotions of turmoil and the consequence of a life that has not
been dealt good cards.

What's that expression? "Life's a b***h and then you die".

Write on !


Helena

[Jamie S.]

WOW! I love this one! It takes my back to how I felt on some of those REALLY hard times in life. Pain is something that unfortunatly we all must endure at some point in life, physical and emotional. It's honest and alittle gut wrenching which made it one of those poems that you dont want to miss a word! Thank you for sharing. I look forward to reading more of your work. Jamie

[Meredith Leigh]

I'm sorry, but I read it. I thought it was raw, and felt like someone was screaming it at me, Exposing themselves. It gave a very powerful image and message, and I heard it loud and clear. The fact that you wrote it in such a way that leaves it poetic still, is quite amazing.
Not an easy thing to do.
Good job!

- Kriss

[~Mariposa Una Lila~]

honey, i like this ...shows your true emotion! and I couldn't help but peek at what you say not too..i agree with Helena...its human nature to take a look! x0xx00x

[Karen666]

lol.....thanks for saying to not read.....i love this piece.....i feel this way many times :) thanks for venting for everyone who feels the same way, You dont want to keep it inside. it becomes poison

[emmajoy]

Life is disgusting .. it's what Mankind has made it.

War after war, greed upon greed, people hurting people, not caring or respecting others. Man ruining what was a beautiful world - making it into the opposite of what the Creator gave us, may He forgive us.

Maybe we ought to see what is good.. because there IS good, a hand of friendship.. a smile.. communion with the stars, a sweet child's smile - they might not seem much but, they matter. It's easy to lose direction, to be led astray, to misunderstand and then lose yourself floundering.

I truly pray, and I do, Moayad, that you find just one thing a day that helps you realise that life is not completely a b***h.

[MagiCrystal]

I had to.. you ask me not .. but in my mind your words.. means... Read me.. what a biotch.. ahahaha. love it

[Janice]

Lol...Don't Read It! Are you kidding me? I would be a real life Bit*h if I didn't!
I love a daring invite and I'm oh so glad I stopped in ...I loved it! Every word, every phrase spoken from the heart and rich with reality. My favorite part is " Let it come, I like it when it's dark I fear the light, it does not becomes me" . Well blues, writing does and this one definitely becomes you... I greatly enjoyed it!

[Vox Machina]

In the eternal words of Aesop Rock, "Life isn't a b***h. Life is a beautiful woman. You only call her a b***h when she won't let you get that..."

Check the song out for the rest, I don't want to be accused of vulgarity.

[Coyote]

What's that expression? "Life's a b***h and then you die".

an equal expression I like is
at the end of the day its f***ing Dark

[justjenn_2u]

Oooops, I read it! I am a curious one : )

I love the sarcasm throughout. At first I thought you were talking about a person but the closure really adds a good grand finale.

Good job!