The B***h

please dont read ,this is just for me,its very disgusting

Our life is all disturbed, so why not having it be disturbed more

I like that chaos, lets have some more, it intrigues me, I know I get nauseated, but I like it

I always like my life like that, never knowing where I am going

I like that, I like to feel lost as I was... all through

I like to feel pain, pain so much of it, Pain becomes me

It suits me well, it’s my life my whole life

I like it when it’s sad; I like it when it’s so bad

I like it when I feel disgust all around me

It feels so good; it feels like home, it’s the only home I know

It’s the only home I ever known

Let it come, I like it when it’s dark

I fear the light, it does not becomes me

I like it when I am getting old and rusty

It feels so good, thats how I know life my dear

That’s how I have always known life,

The b***h she is ...life

 

 

Author's Note

its disgusting please dont read ,this is for really

Reviews

[Helena]

Well if someone says don't read....well its human nature to want to take a look!
So taking a look I am doing ! LOL

Such a strong write, and no I didn't find it disgusting at all, just an honest
poem of emotions of turmoil and the consequence of a life that has not
been dealt good cards.

What's that expression? "Life's a b***h and then you die".

Write on !


Helena

[Naomi Montana Walsh]

As the other reader said how can one not read as we are all secretly drawn to such

[funeralmoon]

this is very very good, you display your anguish so freely in this. Very good job.

[The Analog Kid]

The title is what sucked me in. Then I forgot the title as I read it and got lost in the words. Frantic rambling feel to it. Then I'm trying to figure out what you're trying to describe. Then I get to the end: "The b***h she is...life." Real nice powerful punch. Perfect delivery.

Pat

[Ellen Hammond]

Well I see there are 4 pages of reviews, By saying "don't read this" you have awakened curiosity in a lot of us. I find this write thought provoking but not disgusting.

It is a raw but a realistic look at much of life. Some of us seem to have more than our fair share of hard times, darkness, and chaos. And as your poem points out, we grow accustomed to it as it becomes our norm. Anything that would not cause pain would be so different and most humans fear change. But, Moayad, my friend, darkness can make a even faint candle glow brightly just as your light shines through your writes and reviews.

[Hollywood]

Please don't read? It was quite interesting. Life=B***h. The first part: "I always like my life like that, never knowing where I am going
I like that, I like to feel lost as I was... all through" Reminds me of the movie Into the Wild. Good movie, it's a mind opener. I like this poem. Good work.

[Anastasia Starlena]

Such a very expressive piece. I can feel the pain an sorrow. Very well written and yes life is hard sometimes. But there is always another day.

[Cherrie Palmer]

Poems are a great way to express a feeling or an idea
that another format would not bring the reader to the same conclusion
and your poem works from start to finish. Cherrie

[Gandré]

first I thought it is sexual, like BDSM...but then I have seen, it is irony. wonderful write.

[The Everyday Surprises ..]

i love it. It raw and intriging.
totally honest in the nature of its intense emotions.
i can totally relate because i do feel like this sometimes pain
and darkness is comfortable
Life truely is a B***H!

[<3]

I really liked the pureness of it all, and it was easy to relate to because everyone has had one of those not so great periods in their lifetime
Splendiforous! :D