The B***h

please dont read ,this is just for me,its very disgusting

Our life is all disturbed, so why not having it be disturbed more

I like that chaos, lets have some more, it intrigues me, I know I get nauseated, but I like it

I always like my life like that, never knowing where I am going

I like that, I like to feel lost as I was... all through

I like to feel pain, pain so much of it, Pain becomes me

It suits me well, it’s my life my whole life

I like it when it’s sad; I like it when it’s so bad

I like it when I feel disgust all around me

It feels so good; it feels like home, it’s the only home I know

It’s the only home I ever known

Let it come, I like it when it’s dark

I fear the light, it does not becomes me

I like it when I am getting old and rusty

It feels so good, thats how I know life my dear

That’s how I have always known life,

The b***h she is ...life

 

 

Author's Note

its disgusting please dont read ,this is for really

Reviews

[Helena]

Well if someone says don't read....well its human nature to want to take a look!
So taking a look I am doing ! LOL

Such a strong write, and no I didn't find it disgusting at all, just an honest
poem of emotions of turmoil and the consequence of a life that has not
been dealt good cards.

What's that expression? "Life's a b***h and then you die".

Write on !


Helena

[Angela]

You pegged it. Pain and chaos feel like home. It all has to do with our comfort level and how we have grown up. I hope you learn peace is not an enemy and can be blessed and not boring. So dark. This was me 10 years ago. I hope you step out

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

I had to read this after seeing the title. lol
You are right about life , at times anyway.
Very good writing ..

Chloe

[amandamercer`xo]

to me, this is someone who loves pain and anguish because it is the only thing they've ever known. they've never felt happiness, so how can they understand that there is something more..
a really good write, it wasn't disgusting at all. great job!

[Amy Vaughn]

I like this. I like how you can feel that the person only knows disgust and "bad" for a lack of a better term, and therefore that is home. It's relatable - we feel most comfortable in emotions that may not necessarily be good for us but what we've grown up around.

[Escape My Fate]

Great job :D

[BLACKCRUSH]

"Dolor es amor y amor es dolor " Pain is love and love is pain. I've always viewed life that way . Most people think it happens the other way around. I understand when you say you deserve this and it's all you know but I want you to understand I don't think your disgusting . I think this was a brutal piece to write but my question to you is what did you think of it after you read it like a week later ? This piece didn't have a real flow to it but it didn't need to . I liked the raw , angry and erratic energy. Great work . BC

[Mason]

I would rather live a life of anguish than numbness. bravo

[Karen666]

lol i loved it

[Poet7]

What you like is that you feel. That's all.

[nothing]

You seem to doubt your way with words. You did great. You have a knack for writing something and making the words dance together in a very beautiful and mesmerizing way. You have quite the write, sir. Lend me some advice one day. I loved reading what you have written.

Deeply Yours,
Sarah.