The B***h

The B***h

A Poem by bluessadmood
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please dont read ,this is just for me,its very disgusting

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Our life is all disturbed, so why not having it be disturbed more

I like that chaos, lets have some more, it intrigues me, I know I get nauseated, but I like it

I always like my life like that, never knowing where I am going

I like that, I like to feel lost as I was... all through

I like to feel pain, pain so much of it, Pain becomes me

It suits me well, it’s my life my whole life

I like it when it’s sad; I like it when it’s so bad

I like it when I feel disgust all around me

It feels so good; it feels like home, it’s the only home I know

It’s the only home I ever known

Let it come, I like it when it’s dark

I fear the light, it does not becomes me

I like it when I am getting old and rusty

It feels so good, thats how I know life my dear

That’s how I have always known life,
The b***h she is ...life
 
 

© 2018 bluessadmood


Author's Note

bluessadmood
its disgusting please dont read ,this is for really

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Well if someone says don't read....well its human nature to want to take a look!
So taking a look I am doing ! LOL

Such a strong write, and no I didn't find it disgusting at all, just an honest
poem of emotions of turmoil and the consequence of a life that has not
been dealt good cards.

What's that expression? "Life's a b***h and then you die".

Write on !


Helena

Posted 16 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.




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nice one do read mine too "QUEST OF LIFE".

Posted 13 Years Ago


ooo, I really adore this. don't read? ha! it was very worth it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

life certainly is a b***h but as you say, it's all we know, and so we love it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very strong and true account here! It reflects the bad side of life pretty well, we just have to remember that life isn't ALWAYS a b***h lol.
A good write though
:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


(once again i love this) hmmm i know this feeling. For me its about being defiant, putting the finger up to life and saying 'give me all you've got, I can take it all'. But I'm not always strong. Emotive bleed of a write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


it is very honest. which is really nice.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

To b***h or not to b***h? I liked your poem a lot for it is real. Could not help noticing that even in Mosul, Iraq, one cannot still think about bitching! As you said, bitching can remind of something very familiar, very homey. It is reassuring for one knows how it works. However, one can also develop alternatives without denying this side of one's personality. You almost make it look like the most fantastic thing to do!
It's unapologetic too!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

like this! i ve written a similar poem but didn't have the guts to publish it but maybe i will now.
I know how this feels and well conveyed.

Posted 13 Years Ago


So much of where we can be is dark, I think we honestly have to acknowledge it as part of who and what we are---enjoy that part of you . . .

Posted 13 Years Ago



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