The B***h

please dont read ,this is just for me,its very disgusting

Our life is all disturbed, so why not having it be disturbed more

I like that chaos, lets have some more, it intrigues me, I know I get nauseated, but I like it

I always like my life like that, never knowing where I am going

I like that, I like to feel lost as I was... all through

I like to feel pain, pain so much of it, Pain becomes me

It suits me well, it’s my life my whole life

I like it when it’s sad; I like it when it’s so bad

I like it when I feel disgust all around me

It feels so good; it feels like home, it’s the only home I know

It’s the only home I ever known

Let it come, I like it when it’s dark

I fear the light, it does not becomes me

I like it when I am getting old and rusty

It feels so good, thats how I know life my dear

That’s how I have always known life,

The b***h she is ...life

 

 

Author's Note

its disgusting please dont read ,this is for really

Reviews

[Helena]

Well if someone says don't read....well its human nature to want to take a look!
So taking a look I am doing ! LOL

Such a strong write, and no I didn't find it disgusting at all, just an honest
poem of emotions of turmoil and the consequence of a life that has not
been dealt good cards.

What's that expression? "Life's a b***h and then you die".

Write on !


Helena

[David]

I find this very good and emotional. =]

[bluessadmood]

thank you so much for reading.

[David]

You are very welcome! I like you view. it is a taste of reality. Many of us feel that way. please read the chapter of my book. i am in the middle of rewriting it though. I will have it post probably by the end of the week.

[bluessadmood]

sure my friend,i will read soon

[Frieda P]

HA ain't that the truth? Don't ever say 'don't read'... This was pen'd from the soul with gusto, can tell you meant every word of it....go you!

[bluessadmood]

yes tell you the truth since the beginning of life,i wanted it that way
always at the bottom,so i could never hurt anymore
believe it or not i traveled the world,been to parties with
shiny ladies and all the glamor how i felt so out of place
though i liked what i saw ,i always knew like this was never
made for me,like a different breed since long.i just watched
i never commented i never touched though i longed
afraid i get used to it,thing that i dont like,dont change my life
i like it how it is always old cold and rusty..ha ha

[Frieda P]

Ha to each his own, but you know what they say, nothing venture'd nothing gain'd....be bold live a little, go beyond cold and rusty ha ;-)

[J'Eliot]

Don't read?! It intrigues me!

Strong writing style, compact...overall its good!

Keep writing!

-Eliot

[bluessadmood]

thank you.

[Judy]

I really loved this piece a lot - it was powerful - very sad - but presumably very truthful - it is so well written with great words, and great form

[bluessadmood]

thanks a lot

[MaestroSheeple]

Good job! interesting approach... Review mine too if possible

[Flowrite]

Really, I take this journey further in real talk, reality,
It feels so good, thats how I know life my dear, my dear life is dear
to the heart, where blood is dark, crimson in light of dark
So I smell blood all over this, dried up like combustion on iron
fists of life, right hand of a b***h and the left hand of a b*****d
He never knows what she is doing, because she doesn’t know herself
the only home they know is none, homelessness, because they
have no others to compare 2, but this 2 shall pass through
life’s hands just like the pain in carpal tunnel, now ain’t that a
B***h

Just 4 Fun

[bluessadmood]

thank you so much ,really loved this take,the way you take this further,grand,ha ha
you know i could take much further cursing her,life..never loved how she always behaved.

[Flowrite]

Sorry, something my friends and I use to do: start a piece like this and people just add to it because it is just that grand

[bluessadmood]

thank you so much then ,so glad you liked it

[Aethereal]

You seem to be on a mystical path. Feeling good about life really doesn't have anything to do with what's going on around us, and everything to do with what's going on inside of us. Before we may find that gem in a haystack we must embrace the haystack, or before we may find enlightenment within chaos we must embrace chaos. You have embraced chaos. We're the content of our minds, and not the content of our possessions. If we have too many possessions we may never reach the top of Enlightenment Mountain. There are some mystics who assume that mind, karma, and soul are interconnected: Perhaps so..perhaps so...?

[bluessadmood]

thank you so much.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

One must read when told not to, that you must understand and I found it not underwhelming.

[bluessadmood]

thanks a lot for reading,much appreciated.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Your very welcome my darling.

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

You know, if someone says don't read something, i just have to read it...I'm a rule breaker. I did not find this "disgusting"...I see it is art. Art isn't always pretty, my friend, but that does not mean it is unrelatable or off putting. I can see this for what it is...an emotional outburst of sorts. Trust me, I have these all the time.

[bluessadmood]

ohh dear,you really feel like that too,ha ha,i thought i am the only one who is so strange to this place and and this whole life..glad you read this dear,specially this,this is the true me..
thank you so much for reading this.

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

I can appreciate this type of "art", and I respect the artist even more for having the courage to just say "this is me, deal with it".

[bluessadmood]

what a beautiful response ,so honest

[quinfinn]

first of all, let me say that i love the music on your profile! secondly, i love this write, so profoundly resonant and real and highly identifiable to me. my mom used to say "life is a b***h and then you marry one" and my dad used to say "life is a b***h and she is in heat again" either way, they were both right in some sense. thank you for the thought provoking verse, nicely done!

[bluessadmood]

thank you so much for reading this,hope you liked.

[quinfinn]

truly, an enjoyable read, much acknowledged.