The B***h

please dont read ,this is just for me,its very disgusting

Our life is all disturbed, so why not having it be disturbed more

I like that chaos, lets have some more, it intrigues me, I know I get nauseated, but I like it

I always like my life like that, never knowing where I am going

I like that, I like to feel lost as I was... all through

I like to feel pain, pain so much of it, Pain becomes me

It suits me well, it’s my life my whole life

I like it when it’s sad; I like it when it’s so bad

I like it when I feel disgust all around me

It feels so good; it feels like home, it’s the only home I know

It’s the only home I ever known

Let it come, I like it when it’s dark

I fear the light, it does not becomes me

I like it when I am getting old and rusty

It feels so good, thats how I know life my dear

That’s how I have always known life,

The b***h she is ...life

 

 

Author's Note

its disgusting please dont read ,this is for really

Reviews

[Helena]

Well if someone says don't read....well its human nature to want to take a look!
So taking a look I am doing ! LOL

Such a strong write, and no I didn't find it disgusting at all, just an honest
poem of emotions of turmoil and the consequence of a life that has not
been dealt good cards.

What's that expression? "Life's a b***h and then you die".

Write on !


Helena

[1809 Black Plague Decem..]

Dear, bluesadmood, love it,
the deepest root of our mood, not how we are
great write! ---Maynard

[emmajoygreen]

i remember your writing years ago when your life was very different.

As to your poem, here above: noticing the bad, sad, hurtful, evil..things in life.. is sad but also shows that you feel something because it exists. Just as we love day or night, Winter or Summer, humans need feel dark and fearful moods, your so-called disgusting. Best let it go.. move on to whatever brightens your day!

[bluessadmood]

hello Emma dear how are you..those bitter feelings are gone now,but i remember the days like 14 years ago

[emmajoygreen]

Yes, at least time past. So pleased things are as you want them now. Is good to see you writing again, freely and happily, sir.

[Writergurl (Mama's Girl..]

Don't read, ah but I did, I had to chuckle at this part

"I like that chaos, lets have some more, it intrigues me, I know I get nauseated, but I like it
I always like my life like that, never knowing where I am going"

Why because it is so true! This whole write is true. It is a sad world today.
I enjoyed this, or I wouldn't have left a review. Nicely said and done.

[bluessadmood]

thank you ,so glad you liked it

[Karmee]

Wow, this is so darn good....
love this

[bluessadmood]

thank you , I am glad you liked it

[Kaela Craven]

There is an option to make your writing private

[keith]

often time we find comfort in that which we should push away
wonderful imagery thru stark words chosen
thank you

[bluessadmood]

Ohh thank you my friend,so honoured that you read this hope you liked it.

[SleeplessVolcano]

The word order here and there was a bit rocky, but as a rap song with a strong beat, this could make a powerful impression.

Thanks for sharing.

[bluessadmood]

Thank you so much.

[Wajiha Nayeem]

wow....this was fun reading and lovely!

[bluessadmood]

Thank you so glad you liked it.

[isabella]

such a beautiful poem, very relatable, life is a b***h i wish she could die i have social anxiety

[bluessadmood]

Life is horrible but no dear never wish to die..always love to live..on your own rules..life is a bit cheaper she wants to hurt..that's the point of chaos. Never follow the rules..live open and wide..fear nothing laugh at everything,nothing is worth it..
I hope you get the point from this..
Thank you ever and ever for reading.

[Girl With A Pen]

A very interesting take on life...loving life because it can be cruel....but never hating the cruelness it can be. Only loving every bit you can get because every raw emotion tells you, you are alive. I really liked this poem. I know you warned us not to read, but that just peeked my curiosity.

[bluessadmood]

thank you..yes but this is really how i see it,and more hate it and push it away..so whenever it hits you,you never feel the pain,ha ha