Well if someone says don't read....well its human nature to want to take a look!
So taking a look I am doing ! LOL
Such a strong write, and no I didn't find it disgusting at all, just an honest
poem of emotions of turmoil and the consequence of a life that has not
been dealt good cards.
What's that expression? "Life's a b***h and then you die".
i remember your writing years ago when your life was very different.
As to your poem, here above: noticing the bad, sad, hurtful, evil..things in life.. is sad but also shows that you feel something because it exists. Just as we love day or night, Winter or Summer, humans need feel dark and fearful moods, your so-called disgusting. Best let it go.. move on to whatever brightens your day!
hello Emma dear how are you..those bitter feelings are gone now,but i remember the days like 14 year.. read morehello Emma dear how are you..those bitter feelings are gone now,but i remember the days like 14 years ago
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1 Year Ago
Yes, at least time past. So pleased things are as you want them now. Is good to see you writing agai.. read moreYes, at least time past. So pleased things are as you want them now. Is good to see you writing again, freely and happily, sir.
Don't read, ah but I did, I had to chuckle at this part
"I like that chaos, lets have some more, it intrigues me, I know I get nauseated, but I like it
I always like my life like that, never knowing where I am going"
Why because it is so true! This whole write is true. It is a sad world today.
I enjoyed this, or I wouldn't have left a review. Nicely said and done.
such a beautiful poem, very relatable, life is a b***h i wish she could die i have social anxiety
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Life is horrible but no dear never wish to die..always love to live..on your own rules..life is a bi.. read moreLife is horrible but no dear never wish to die..always love to live..on your own rules..life is a bit cheaper she wants to hurt..that's the point of chaos. Never follow the rules..live open and wide..fear nothing laugh at everything,nothing is worth it..
I hope you get the point from this..
Thank you ever and ever for reading.
A very interesting take on life...loving life because it can be cruel....but never hating the cruelness it can be. Only loving every bit you can get because every raw emotion tells you, you are alive. I really liked this poem. I know you warned us not to read, but that just peeked my curiosity.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
thank you..yes but this is really how i see it,and more hate it and push it away..so whenever it hit.. read morethank you..yes but this is really how i see it,and more hate it and push it away..so whenever it hits you,you never feel the pain,ha ha
The Music I like,the Carpenter,all their songs and albums,The Super Tramps,one of their songs ,reminds me of a girl who nearly broke my heart,still feel the pain ,no ,no i will not tell who
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