i thought i was immune ,i had wisdom i joked at myself ,but you said you loved me ,you never loved me,oh the fool i was
had a dreamy tranquil life
Sleepy happy graceful nights used to love me all my life and rejoiced
In being wonderfully alive used to love everything I did
Never for once did i regret
My walk through lanes of life was steady strides
Full of joy laughs all dreams
Serene Thoughts I had piece with me
Myself I loved and...and then I loved her... I just fell... and loved her
Yes she came full into my life
I told me love was not for me,no... no more for your bones getting old and cold
Never ready for aches and breaks and... tremulence
I had never known for I liked simply my life free and no
Worries restraints, where then she came even bad dreams
Things I never known before
You said you will fill my life to brim with joy I never known
I rejoiced for a while at everything yes,
I lived everything I saw and ready to break the peace I always known
For I loved again i cried yes,aloud i loved again, yes I broke my oath again and again... ............................
Stirred every wave in my being, I was not ready for
Is love always torment, or it's only you, the more I come to you
You come to me, shaking all grounds under my feet, why me
You say you loved me you died for me and I felt it???death only for me
So why I feel tormented... all the while
You sit by me and I dream of that lovely face but oh soul you always
Told get away for fire knows nothing but to burn and mess with your peace
I say I want to feel it one more time, even if to my demise then i go, I know
She offered me a lot but I saw nothing but wild fire coming !!!
I like to get warmth but you sound like you also... made an oath to break every part... of me
Is love really so cruel, as I never known
Oh the fool I am I told myself again and again stay away, stay away
But you will never leave me be for you said, come here, I told you, she said I loved you
Silly what more my youth I gave, I want it back
What? You do not want to die,but i am your death
To be continued...
Ibsen the dramatist once came to land of Arabia, he was enchanted at the charm he saw ,he loved a young lass, she lured me ,she danced ,he saw the beauty and was happy ,but all suddenly she came to laugh at him ,you fool she said ,you old you thought you dreamed and kept laughing, so he just gathered his clothes and walked away, from the deep snow then to the Sahara then back again to the freezing cold, he walked wisely away ,laughing,thinking i was a joke...
i just loved that dramatist IBSEN and the way he pictured how he, the wise and know it all, was fooled by a small Arab girl,it was so symbolic i could hardly catch his meaning...,she lured him ,danced for him until he was full in love and dozed and fell asleep,but she took the chance,she laughed at him and ran away,like making fun of him,from the freezing cold he came to the hot Sahara ,he found magic and found her,he was a fool ,then back to the icy cold he strolled back,laughing all the way
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A very strong piece.............packed to the brim with emotions we have all felt.........this really struck a
chord with me
Stirred every wave in my being, I was not ready for
Is love always torment, or it's only you, the more I come to you
You come to me, shaking all grounds under my feet, why me
It is how I felt a year ago........and that pain never seems to ebb, even in the happiest of moments,
and the sadness is that we lose faith............you write with tremendous feeling.
I like the lyrical beauty and lightness of this poem. Not only Ibsen loved to travell to arabic world, also painters artists did, the Germans befire WW 1 loved Tunesia the white blue houses I've seen in paintings, Emil Nolde, Paul Klee has been there, too
And woman is seductress. Eveb subconsciously. Without knowing. This was very pretty poem. I enjoyed very much. I canno rate it technically impossible with BB. Pls send me what u like me to read - a link pls.
"For I loved again i cried yes,aloud i loved again, yes I broke my oath again and again... ............................"
Amazing write, I just had to review this after reading it yet again. Oh, what fools
love makes of us. We keep breaking "oaths", fall and made fools of by "love" again, but
we keep doing it! Do we ever learn?
I truly adored this write, you did a wonderful job and I wait patiently for the next
chapter Moayad!
This is again filled with raw emotion. Your prosec( the ones I've read) remind me of the beauty in the wildreness; natural, raw yet, so graceful.
And, by-the-way, man has no option except to be fooled: whether he admits or not but, some men are Granted a priceless gem with whom being afool becomes so unimportant that one feels like the King of all the lands
WOW this piece just hit me with emotion.
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had a dreamy tranquil life
Sleepy happy graceful nights used to love me all my life and rejoiced
In being wonderfully alive used to love everything I did
Never for once did i regret
My walk through lanes of life was steady strides
Full of joy laughs all dreams
Serene Thoughts I had piece with me
Myself I loved and...and then I loved her... I just fell... and loved her
Yes she came full into my life
I told me love was not for me,no... no more for your bones getting old and cold"
Love the words that you chose to use in this because it did enhance it that much more. Powerful and intense, they way it should be told and you nailed it hard to my heart, thanks!!!
this is beautifully written & very powerful. "For I loved again i cried yes,aloud i loved again, yes I broke my oath again and again... ............................
Stirred every wave in my being, I was not ready for
Is love always torment, or it's only you, the more I come to you" love does feel like torment at times & everyone is left to wonder, is it really worth it? a wonderful, beautiful, sad poem.
I think it would be hard to find someone who has lived a while, who hasn't said " I will never love,again." I think your words will be understood by many. It is such a hollow feeling you write of. Great piece. Rain..
The Music I like,the Carpenter,all their songs and albums,The Super Tramps,one of their songs ,reminds me of a girl who nearly broke my heart,still feel the pain ,no ,no i will not tell who
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