how i feel for you

words of love

 

as tears run down your face
you know I am there to wipe them away
as you hold closer I hold you tight never letting you away
I will talk to you ,I will even sing
I will dance for you
I will play the clown just for
and you laugh,laugh my love
I just want to wipe them tears away
will do anything just for you for
I will build us castles and dreams and hopes
though holding loose in the air ,our love will hold them strong
so they are always there
I will fight the world for you
I will pave the way under your feet
I will do as no one done for my love
I will do the strangest things for my love
mock me as you like ,never care
I will always do it for my love
I will do wonders ,I will travel the world just for you
my love
I will forever want you happy
even if in a dreamy world just for us
that will be just enough for me
if you were in it

Author's Note

i reviewed a writing i was touched so i wrote this

Reviews

[Althea Tremaine]

This is beautiful. You have a certain voice, even in your reviews, which is a sign that you're in touch with your inner self. Inspiration is always hard to find, but in your case, it seems to have planted a seed that grew into a lovely patch of emotion.

Apart from a few grammatical and punctuation touch-ups, you have a wonderful poem in your hands.

[Ankhesen Mié]

You have so much love; no wonder things often lead back to sadness for you. Nothing causes more depression than love. You also have a very "givin" attitude; in your poetry I've read so far, I'm stumbled across the theme of wanting to giving someone everything, and having only your best intentions for them.

" will forever want you happy
even if in a dreamy world just for us
that will be just enough for me
if you were in it"

Even if it's just fantasy, you'll be satisfied. It's beyond endearing.

[Antony]

This is an expression of so much love, it is tells me that you are so deeply in love that it is almost impossible for you to think of anything else. Like you just can't express it enough, it is so powerful.

Tony

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I will forever want you happy
even if in a dreamy world just for us
that will be just enough for me
if you were in it

This is ever so touching and well written, like this and the emotion behind it.

[Jane Doe]

'I will fight the world for you
I will pave the way under your feet
I will do as no one done for my love
I will do the strangest things for my love
mock me as you like ,never care
I will always do it for my love'

If only everyone in the world were willing and able to love like this. It stirred within me a sense of longing and a desire to find someone who could love so deeply, so completely. Another wonderful, wonderful piece.

[Kristina]

Very touching. I truly understand those feelings. Been there dodn that!!
Excellent read my child!! Keep on doing what you doing!!!

[Helena]

Tender, passionate, everything a love poem should be and more.

Amazing and insightful, you have penned a poem to be proud of!

Helena

[samaveiled]

i really liked that. nice. i look forward to more of that...i can taste it...

[MagiCrystal]

Lovely words.. just to make smile.. I like that.. to wipe the tears and love is present... nice poem very nice ! M

[Ally]

This was such a great poem!
They way it begins then has a suddle ending.
Not a too much of a suddle ending, but enough to be mesmirized by what you just read, and also a calming reassuring "I'm there for you always" type of feel.
If that's not what you were aiming for, I just wanted to say:
BRAVO!