how i feel for you

words of love

 

as tears run down your face
you know I am there to wipe them away
as you hold closer I hold you tight never letting you away
I will talk to you ,I will even sing
I will dance for you
I will play the clown just for
and you laugh,laugh my love
I just want to wipe them tears away
will do anything just for you for
I will build us castles and dreams and hopes
though holding loose in the air ,our love will hold them strong
so they are always there
I will fight the world for you
I will pave the way under your feet
I will do as no one done for my love
I will do the strangest things for my love
mock me as you like ,never care
I will always do it for my love
I will do wonders ,I will travel the world just for you
my love
I will forever want you happy
even if in a dreamy world just for us
that will be just enough for me
if you were in it

Author's Note

i reviewed a writing i was touched so i wrote this

Reviews

[Althea Tremaine]

This is beautiful. You have a certain voice, even in your reviews, which is a sign that you're in touch with your inner self. Inspiration is always hard to find, but in your case, it seems to have planted a seed that grew into a lovely patch of emotion.

Apart from a few grammatical and punctuation touch-ups, you have a wonderful poem in your hands.

[Brianna Brie]

Absolutely endearing and loving. Don't you just love it when inspiration shows up in unexpected places. Sweet.

[Adelia Alighieri]

It's beautiful....Some where deep inside me, I have this desire that some one some where feels the same way about me...

[~angelalala~]

i loved this poem. its such a beautiful love poem. everyone wants to be loved that deeply, that it seems you exist in a world that only you and your lover know about. its a wonderful romantic thought, & i envy it. "I will build us castles and dreams and hopes" this is my favorite line, but i loved the entire poem. an emotional, heart felt write.

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*sighs* To hear a gentleman speak these words carries more weight than a 1,000 poems. Your writing possesses a sentimental quality escalating into fully blossomed emotion; in this case, love. Beautifully written marked with genuine sincerity.

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

I just had to revisit this one again to tell you how lovely it is. Your sentiments are warm and tender.

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

The ultimate happiness always comes from loving another before self, having a willingness to always see the other happy, and always seeing someone for the best that they can be. There is no love to equal that of an unselfish, willing-to-die-for-another love. You speak of such love, and it's beautiful.

[darkgurl]

This is so beautiful your emotions are there are in this, this is very well written.....Kim

[Velveteen Rabbit]

This paints a beautiful picture of one's love and devotion...it is so touching! I just discovered your profile today. Not only this poem, but all the rest of your poems that I have read so far are pulsating with such strong emotion that I cannot tear myself away from them. Thank you for writing this and your other poems and stories. :)

[AshCat]

This is really good. I can tell that alot of your feelings flowed into this poem, which makes it more real. I enjoyed reading it. good job :)

-- Fallen Angel

[Onyx Sky]

This is what every girl needs to hear when they're crying. Nice work.