how i feel for you

words of love

 

as tears run down your face
you know I am there to wipe them away
as you hold closer I hold you tight never letting you away
I will talk to you ,I will even sing
I will dance for you
I will play the clown just for
and you laugh,laugh my love
I just want to wipe them tears away
will do anything just for you for
I will build us castles and dreams and hopes
though holding loose in the air ,our love will hold them strong
so they are always there
I will fight the world for you
I will pave the way under your feet
I will do as no one done for my love
I will do the strangest things for my love
mock me as you like ,never care
I will always do it for my love
I will do wonders ,I will travel the world just for you
my love
I will forever want you happy
even if in a dreamy world just for us
that will be just enough for me
if you were in it

Author's Note

i reviewed a writing i was touched so i wrote this

Reviews

[Althea Tremaine]

This is beautiful. You have a certain voice, even in your reviews, which is a sign that you're in touch with your inner self. Inspiration is always hard to find, but in your case, it seems to have planted a seed that grew into a lovely patch of emotion.

Apart from a few grammatical and punctuation touch-ups, you have a wonderful poem in your hands.

[Barbara Walker]

This is very descriptive and has good imagery. It's touching to see what a man will do for his love to be happy.

[The Analog Kid]

Very beautiful BSM! You have a lot to give in this write!

[A.A.Romanczuk]

what sweetly innocent sentiments...a perfect portrayal of the dreamy side of love...You've gotten to the heart of the rose, my friend :)

[Jennifer Marie Theresa ..]

This shows a love so strong and a protection for the one you love. It shows dreams being built from love and a future. I love it.

[Jenny-Jen-Jen]

I love this, it's so beautiful.
Expressing true feelings for a certain person is often tough, especially now a days, but reading this poem may help some to realize that the heart wants what the heart wants. You shouldn't fear showing someone how much you care-- "mock me as you like, never care". I loved that line especially.

Wonderful write-- great meaning.

[Meredith Leigh]

This has so much dedication, so much love and such beauty flowing from it! It was just so lovley! I loved the rhyme scheme and the intense feeling I got from reading it. It was just so great! Great job!!

- Kriss

[Kelley]

You and I think alike when it comes to love Blues.....smiles
Men should be willing to anything for the woman they love.
Great write as alway.

Kelley

[Meredith Leigh]

Sweet, beautiful, emotional and just wonderful!
'I will fight the world for you
I will pave the way under your feet
I will do as no one done for my love
I will do the strangest things for my love'

Perfect!!!

- Kriss

[~Mariposa Una Lila~]

this is adorable, goes rather well with my fairy tale!! Thank you for your review of my poems, i find yours a delight to read! x0x0x0x0x0x

[Walkingblind]

This is so sweet and tender I really enjoyed reading and feeling such emotion.
Every woman wants to hear this, that a real man loves he enough to give of
himself, so that she might return the favor. I imagine this being whispered in the ear
of your love because it's so gentle even on the computer screen. Very nice I really
liked this.