a brief serenity

crisp sounds forming

  through the hushed leaves.

gentle songs outlining

  the silent language among game.

change of color emerging

  over this existence. 

a moment of old rapture. . 

repeatSs

Author's Note

hm, thoughts? ideas?

Reviews

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. this is definitely a stunning micro epic ... i loved the images ... i loved the way your words flow ... as of about 12 hours ago, i reconnected with a very special "moment of old rapture" ... so, i relate to these words completely ... in fact, you articulated a certain happiness and "serenity" that i wasn't able to ... and won't be able to ... in a million light years ... spectacular work, dear poet ... superbly written ... and relayed ...

[Marie]

Between this existence and the next in an autumn hue...

[An Ordinary Woman]

loves "repeatSs," how it gives character to an original piece of writing. I think it's the grandest little poem!

[Lydia]

Great poem! It is very well written. Awesome!