Release

Still.

the company, the comfort,

sound of solid drops.

 

Thoughts cluttered,

flashbacks, reflections, uncertainty.

Slowly, comes

relief

the company, the comfort.

 

Soon, this weightless body

overrides myself.

the company, the comfort,

Released.

Author's Note

opinions, comments?

Reviews

[Divinity Sleeps in This]

The soul of memory blue, the spirit of our lost & found.

Nice!

[Kenneth The Poet]

Awesome.

[Aristede Craig Jr]

i actually love this very awesome

[Seshat Nidaba]

I heard you got drunk that night in the country and fell asleep with your sweetheart in the leaves.

Actually, this was a very impressionable piece, very fluid and open-ended to interpretation.

[A. Fischer]

Nice! :)

[Chris]

For me its too many questions to appreciate where you're going or taking the reader...

Chris

[kmartell]

The poem is very direct isn't it. Using words to convey description as metaphor, good job with this.

[Daniel88Batson]

I like the minimalistic poetry here.
I would love to see this as cinematic poetry.
Perfect form I must say.
Well done.

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. someone i used to know ... would have read this and said ... "so real that it's surreal" ... beautifully written ... ravishing poetry ...