Tree

Always,

It has been t.h.e. perfection

never with a hint of judgement

          . only left to be.

 

The effect.

Solitary silence revealing

  the unsung.

Colors, interpreting

  the disposition.

 

Requiring no patience

Always,

it will remain to be.

Author's Note

Please assist me with comments/suggestions.

Reviews

[Wolf's Dark Song]

I like it as it is. Its very unique...honoring the power of the tree to just be and be so much more.

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

'Colors, interpreting the disposition.' One of the finest poetry lines I've yet read. I love how you describe the tree without even using the word. It lets me, the reader, visualize my own image, thereby making this a kind of interactive poem.
Magnifico!

[Chris]

A philosophical tenet.

Chris

[JimmyFlux]

Reflective and aesthetically pleasing. The lines hang out like branches, the meaning of their words like leaves.

[Starry Eyed]

Very well written! Im not sure what esle I should say!

[FJ Davis]

A psychological examination of one of Kilmer's Muses: yielding an artful and well-written--though concise--profile.
Very fine work, blue.

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moving, very moving
words
and
beautiful imagery

[Emily B]

I like the oddities of capitalization and the quirky period points . . . I think it works very well. And I think trees and poems have very much in common. We shouldn't have to impose a meaning, they should always just BE. Wonderful, creative work

[李[A]]

I'm a bit confused at the period placing such as t.h.e. and a few other ones. Overall, I like the way you express the tree in very simplistic terms. Also, stanza two uses some solemn vocab. Overall, great job!