world

walking the world,

looking for an alternative growth

a new path unexplored

taking larger steps,

following perhaps a dangerous muse 

new scenes arise,       now

       finding the true inner souls

once stolen by them

destination soon solved

    conceiving new paths

 

leading to an accepting world. 

Author's Note

thoughts?

Reviews

[SHEEMA HUQ]

you use language so powerfully
(a useful skill for a poet!)
your form and pace is just excellent
really great

[Aristede Craig Jr]

Accepting yourself first love ,let yourself love tis love is all

[Sami Khalil]

We have to accept ourselves and then chart our paths alternative from the masses where in our inner souls we find the ultimate destination of peace and joy. The real journey is within and when we find the Light we have found the source of it all...
Well penned...

[Lily Mae]

I see and feel much truth in your ideas and words with this.. Well written..xo

[Southern Cross]

I like your style it's different . The spacing acts as a pause. Positive feelings from this thought of a new beginning.

[Emily B]

loveliness to share

[daydreamer]

Out of the box thinking well written. Finding new things brings great joy. But; at times dont you think we ignore the happiness that things which exist in our hands bring us? Perhaps that could reinvent the way of accepting the existing world:)

[lee von cleef]

Introspective piece , I like, But find the "World" (not your poem)to be cruelly "indifferent" Me I have to stay in the journey to be happy, out come ," accepted" falling through the air, rush,being shot at and missed, double rush, waking my daughter up in the mornings a blessing, not to be forgotten, a little piece of breath to fuel me.

[Poetic Beauty]

Many of us are looking for alternative paths but really we don't have to look of them we just have to step outside our own boxes and there are others that will accept us know matter what direction we decide to take.

[Dayran]

I must say Blue that you are one person I never thought needed to change. Your writing always came close to the vein. Perhaps you now think you can be even better. Well ... that's different isn't it?

[blueseeker]

firstly, thank you for the review. i believe we are all in need of change. of course we all do naturally everyday. the kind of change described above is the kind needed to keep moving forward...to perhaps find, peace.

out of curosity, where did you previously lecture?
i enjoy reading your writings as they are always filled with much thought. i look forward to reading more in the near future.

[Dayran]

Olympia College, Malaysia. And thks.