world

world

A Poem by blueseeker

walking the world,
looking for an alternative growth
a new path unexplored

taking larger steps,
following perhaps a dangerous muse 

new scenes arise,       now
       finding the true inner souls
once stolen by them

destination soon solved
    conceiving new paths
 
leading to an accepting world. 

© 2013 blueseeker


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blueseeker
thoughts?

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you use language so powerfully
(a useful skill for a poet!)
your form and pace is just excellent
really great

Posted 11 Years Ago


Accepting yourself first love ,let yourself love tis love is all

Posted 11 Years Ago


We have to accept ourselves and then chart our paths alternative from the masses where in our inner souls we find the ultimate destination of peace and joy. The real journey is within and when we find the Light we have found the source of it all...
Well penned...

Posted 11 Years Ago


I see and feel much truth in your ideas and words with this.. Well written..xo

Posted 11 Years Ago


I like your style it's different . The spacing acts as a pause. Positive feelings from this thought of a new beginning.

Posted 11 Years Ago


loveliness to share

Posted 11 Years Ago


Out of the box thinking well written. Finding new things brings great joy. But; at times dont you think we ignore the happiness that things which exist in our hands bring us? Perhaps that could reinvent the way of accepting the existing world:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Introspective piece , I like, But find the "World" (not your poem)to be cruelly "indifferent" Me I have to stay in the journey to be happy, out come ," accepted" falling through the air, rush,being shot at and missed, double rush, waking my daughter up in the mornings a blessing, not to be forgotten, a little piece of breath to fuel me.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Many of us are looking for alternative paths but really we don't have to look of them we just have to step outside our own boxes and there are others that will accept us know matter what direction we decide to take.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I must say Blue that you are one person I never thought needed to change. Your writing always came close to the vein. Perhaps you now think you can be even better. Well ... that's different isn't it?

Posted 11 Years Ago


blueseeker

11 Years Ago

firstly, thank you for the review. i believe we are all in need of change. of course we all do natur.. read more
Dayran

11 Years Ago

Olympia College, Malaysia. And thks.

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discover passionately and be a fool doing so. im very interested in the impossible questions of this universe. or possibly the choices and actions of humanity. questions will always consume my mind.. more..

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